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llimas

Jan. 15, 2025

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What I do for a living

I'm a software developer, focused on backend.
I've been working with software development for seven years.
I decided to follow this career when I was a child because I was so comfortable with computers and I liked to play games.
I thought that I will work developing games, but no. I work on enterprise softwares.

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What I dDo fFor a lLiving

I'm a software developer, focused on backendwho specializes in backend development.

I've been working within software development for seven years.

I decided to followpursue this career when I was a child because I was so comfortable with. Growing up, I was passionate about computers, and I liked to play games.

I rephrased this sentence to sound more natural

I thought that I will work developing games, but noas a game developer, but that didn't turn out to be the case for me.

I work on enterprise softwares.

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Interesting to hear! I'm a Marketing Data Analyst. What technologies do you use for work?

I'm a software developer, focused on the backend.

I've been working within software development for seven years.

Alternate: I decided to followpursue this career when I was a child because I was so comfortable with computers and I liked to play games.

I thought that I will workould be [working on] developing games, but no.,

I would personally connect this sentence and the last one, it just feels natural. If I were to say it aloud, you would hear some emphasis on the "but no" part, haha.

I work on enterprise softwares.

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Great job!
Being a software engineer is a great and stable career path and sounds like it's going well considering you've been one for 7 years.

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llimas

Jan. 16, 2025

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Thank you. I didn't know this word "pursue".

What I do for a living

I'm a software developer, focused on the backend.

I've been working within software development for seven years.

I decided to follow this career when I was a child because I was so comfortable with computers and I liked to play computer games.

I thought that I will work developing games, but no.

I work on enterprise softwares.

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llimas

Jan. 16, 2025

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Thank you :)

What I do for a living

I'm a software developer, focused on backend development.

I've been working with software development for seven years.

You could also say "I've been working in software development for seven years."

I decided to follow this career when I was a child because I was so comfortable with computers and I liked to play games.

I thought that I willould work developing games, but nothat didn't happen or that didn't work out.

Instead, I work on enterprise softwares.

You don't need the "instead" but it seemed to be a more logical transition from your previous statement.

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Well done.

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llimas

Jan. 16, 2025

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thank you :)

What I do for a living


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What I dDo fFor a lLiving

I decided to follow this career when I was a child because I was so comfortable with computers and I liked to play games.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I decided to follow this career when I was a child because I was so comfortable with computers and I liked to play computer games.

Alternate: I decided to followpursue this career when I was a child because I was so comfortable with computers and I liked to play games.

I decided to followpursue this career when I was a child because I was so comfortable with. Growing up, I was passionate about computers, and I liked to play games.

I rephrased this sentence to sound more natural

I thought that I will work developing games, but no.


I thought that I willould work developing games, but nothat didn't happen or that didn't work out.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I thought that I will workould be [working on] developing games, but no.,

I would personally connect this sentence and the last one, it just feels natural. If I were to say it aloud, you would hear some emphasis on the "but no" part, haha.

I thought that I will work developing games, but noas a game developer, but that didn't turn out to be the case for me.

I work on enterprise softwares.


Instead, I work on enterprise softwares.

You don't need the "instead" but it seemed to be a more logical transition from your previous statement.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I work on enterprise softwares.

I'm a software developer, focused on backend.


I'm a software developer, focused on backend development.

I'm a software developer, focused on the backend.

I'm a software developer, focused on the backend.

I'm a software developer, focused on backendwho specializes in backend development.

I've been working with software development for seven years.


I've been working with software development for seven years.

You could also say "I've been working in software development for seven years."

I've been working within software development for seven years.

I've been working within software development for seven years.

I've been working within software development for seven years.

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