July 4, 2021
What I believed as a kid
When I was a young boy, I thought that every adult is complete. For example, I thought that all of what my parents said is right, all of what my teachers taught me is the answer, and all of what adults do is absolute. But as I grow up, I came to realize that it is fault gradually.
I don't intend to look down adults. I just feel how difficult it is to become a perfect person. There are many problems which don't have the definite answer, and we often have to try to solve those kinds of problems. Through my teenager life, I found the truth and now I have a bit fear to go out into society. But time goes on, and I have to move forward.
When I was a young boy, I thought that every adult iwas complete.
Throughout my teenager life, I found the truth and am now I have a bit fearful to go out into society.
But as time goes on, and I have to move forward.
This is just my recommendation. The way you wrote the sentence makes sense and is correct but it just doesn't sound right to me. (This is just my opinion)
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What I believed as a kid |
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When I was a young boy, I thought that every adult is complete. When I was a young boy, I thought that every adult |
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For example, I thought that all of what my parents said is right, all of what my teachers taught me is the answer, and all of what adults do is absolute. |
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But as I grow up, I came to realize that it is fault gradually. |
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I don't intend to look down adults. |
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I just feel how difficult it is to become a perfect person. |
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There are many problems which don't have the definite answer, and we often have to try to solve those kinds of problems. |
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Through my teenager life, I found the truth and now I have a bit fear to go out into society. Throughout my teenage |
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But time goes on, and I have to move forward. But as time goes on, This is just my recommendation. The way you wrote the sentence makes sense and is correct but it just doesn't sound right to me. (This is just my opinion) |
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