July 28, 2021
What I Am Thinking When I Am Writing (in Langcorrect)
I have written 33 entries in langcorrect since I rigistered. And I nearly write an entry every day in July. It surprises me a lot because I never think that I can persist so long.
At the begining, I usually had no idea to pick a topic. When I was writing some chores in Chinese online, I got the idea that I can write them in English in this platform. Although my English is so poor, I can try to start with simple sentence. What the most important thing is keep writing. Only if you begin to write, you will know your destination of learning English.
I saw a tag in Chinese which is "300 words of everyday writing practise" (每日三百字写作练习) in a platform. I followed the tag for a few days but I had been so annoyed when I was writing. So I gave up soon. But now, I am following the tag in English instead and I am happy and full of anticipation when I am writing. I know that there is someone will read my entry and make correction. I like the interaction which is similar to you make a wish and send it into a drift bottle, then you throw it in the see, you never know who will answer you but you know you will get a reply. It is so warm. I love the platform. I love all the people in it.
What I Am Thinking When I Am Writing (in Langcorrect)
I have written 33 entries in lLangcCorrect since I riegistered.
And I nearlyhave written an entry nearly every day in July.
I think you mean to say that you write nearly (or almost) every day rather than that you nearly (or almost) write every day.
It surprises me a lot because I never think thaought I canould persist so long.
At the beginning, I usually had no idea what to pick a to pick.
When I was writing somea list of chores in Chinese online, I got the idea that I canould write them in English in this platform.
I understand chores to mean tasks or brief jobs to get done. Chores could include school homework tasks around the house like washing dishes or feeding pets.
Although my English is so poor, I can try to start with simple sentences.
What tThe most important thing is to keep writing.
Only if you begin to write, you will knowyou reach your destination of: learning and communicating effectively in English.
I might be adding too much to your sentence, but I think you are communicating effectively while you are learning.
I saw a tag in Chinese which istated "300 words of everyday writing practisce" (每日三百字写作练习) in a platform.
I followed the tag for a few days, but I had beenbecame so annoyed when I was writing.
But now, I am following the tag in English instead, and I am happy and full of anticipation when I am writing.
I know that there is someone who will read my entry and make corrections.
I like the interaction, which is similar to you makemaking a wish and sending it into a drift in a bottle, then you throw it in the see, ya. You never know who will answer you, but you know you will get a reply.
Perhaps two sentences here will help.
I love the platform.
I love all the people in it.
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This is the first time I've offered feedback to anyone. I hope I have been helpful.
July 28, 2021
When I was writing somea list of chores in Chinese online, I got the idea that I canould write them in English in this platform.
The reason I use "chores" is I think it also means "unimportant and little stuff".
July 28, 2021
Thank you very much. It helps a lot.
July 29, 2021
I probably should've explained "chores" a little more when I suggested it :) It specifically means household tasks that are boring and probably don't really feel like accomplishments. Laundry, washing dishes, tidying things up, vacuuming. So it does sort of mean trivial, but it means trivial in a specific way.
Here I would've said "writing about trivial things", "writing about mundane things", "writing about random things" - something like that. Depending on exactly which shade of meaning you wanted to express.
I liked this journal a lot! The message in a bottle simile is very sweet :)
July 29, 2021
I probably should've explained "chores" a little more when I suggested it :) It specifically means household tasks that are boring and probably don't really feel like accomplishments. Laundry, washing dishes, tidying things up, vacuuming. So it does sort of mean trivial, but it means trivial in a specific way. Here I would've said "writing about trivial things", "writing about mundane things", "writing about random things" - something like that. Depending on exactly which shade of meaning you wanted to express. I liked this journal a lot! The message in a bottle simile is very sweet :)
Thanks. Once I use "trivia" to describe something trivial, someone correted it with "chores", so I use chores this time. Can I use trivia here?
July 29, 2021
Yeah, that was me! That's why I said I should've explained it better. You can use trivia here, but I'd prefer "trivial things" - in normal usage, when people say "trivia" on its own, often they mean "various unimportant facts that are useful to know when you are playing general knowledge games". Like you go to a bar and it's quiz night, they ask questions like "What is the capital of Indonesia?" "What year did King Charles I die?" "How many squares are there on a chessboard?"
If you know lots of random things like that, you can answer the questions correctly and you get a prize and people say "Wow! You really know your trivia." If you say "writing about trivia", it might sound like you mean things that are related to quizzes like that.
July 29, 2021
Yeah, that was me! That's why I said I should've explained it better. You can use trivia here, but I'd prefer "trivial things" - in normal usage, when people say "trivia" on its own, often they mean "various unimportant facts that are useful to know when you are playing general knowledge games". Like you go to a bar and it's quiz night, they ask questions like "What is the capital of Indonesia?" "What year did King Charles I die?" "How many squares are there on a chessboard?" If you know lots of random things like that, you can answer the questions correctly and you get a prize and people say "Wow! You really know your trivia." If you say "writing about trivia", it might sound like you mean things that are related to quizzes like that.
OK, I got it. It sounds fun. And the words "trivia" and "trivial" looks so similar but totally have different meanings.
July 30, 2021
I agree this is an awesome platform and community! Similar to you I've also been trying writing a lot more in July too! 加油!
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I have written 33 entries in langcorrect since I rigistered. I have written 33 entries in
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And I nearly write an entry every day in July. And I I think you mean to say that you write nearly (or almost) every day rather than that you nearly (or almost) write every day. |
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It surprises me a lot because I never think that I can persist so long. It surprises me a lot because I never th |
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At the begining, I usually had no idea to pick a topic. At the beginning, I usually had no idea what to |
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When I was writing some chores in Chinese online, I got the idea that I can write them in English in this platform. When I was writing I understand chores to mean tasks or brief jobs to get done. Chores could include school homework tasks around the house like washing dishes or feeding pets. |
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Although my English is so poor, I can try to start with simple sentence. Although my English is so poor, I can try to start with simple sentences. |
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What the most important thing is keep writing.
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Only if you begin to write, you will know your destination of learning English. Only if you begin to write, I might be adding too much to your sentence, but I think you are communicating effectively while you are learning. |
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I saw a tag in Chinese which is "300 words of everyday writing practise" (每日三百字写作练习) in a platform. I saw a tag in Chinese which |
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I followed the tag for a few days but I had been so annoyed when I was writing. I followed the tag for a few days, but I |
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So I gave up soon. |
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But now, I am following the tag in English instead and I am happy and full of anticipation when I am writing. But now, I am following the tag in English instead, and I am happy and full of anticipation when I am writing. |
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I know that there is someone will read my entry and make correction. I know that there is someone who will read my entry and make corrections. |
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I like the interaction which is similar to you make a wish and send it into a drift bottle, then you throw it in the see, you never know who will answer you but you know you will get a reply. I like the interaction, which is similar to Perhaps two sentences here will help. |
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It is so warm. |
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I love the platform. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love all the people in it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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