Oct. 16, 2025
What historical sites have you visited?
I have visited the Anne Frank's hiding place in the Netherlands when I was 20 years old with my cousin's family. I impressed, but more than that I felt sadness quietly. I remember I bought some cheese that is famous at local for my family. We ate them all for a few days.
What historical sites have you visited?
I have visited the Anne Frank's hiding place in the Netherlands when I was 20 years old with my cousin's family.
I was quite impressed, but more than that I felt sadness quietly.I felt sad on the inside
I remember I bought some local cheese that is famous at local for my family.
We ate them all for a few days.
Oct. 17, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I think it went a little better this time.
But my writing is probably a bit too formal.
Oct. 18, 2025
You are welcome. I think that your register is fine for this journal entry.
Whatich historical sites have you visited?
Here "which" is the best word choice
I have visited the Anne Frank's hiding place in the Netherlands when I was 20 years old with my cousin's family.
"have" sounds a little unnatural here
I was impressed, but more than that I felt sadness quietly.
Since "impressed" is a state of being it requires "was" (because this sentence is in past tense).
I remember I bought some cheese that is famous at local cheese for my family.
Reworded to sound more natural
We ate ithem all forin a few days.
I'm guessing that you ate all of the cheese so have worded it for that meaning
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I'm sure that was a memorable experience. I've never been, but I'd like to go some day!
Oct. 16, 2025
Thank you so much for your careful corrections.
You teach me natural-sounding expressions, which is very helpful for my studies.
I still make a few mistakes.
My expressions are probably quite formal.
What historical sites have you visited?
I have visited the Anne Frank's hiding place in the Netherlands when I was 20 years old with my cousin's family.
I was impressed, but more than that, I felt sadness quietly.
"I impressed" means you impressed someone, but "I was impressed" means YOU were the one who was shocked. So, was impressed is correct. Comma after that
I remember I bought some cheese that is famous at local for my family.
We ate them all for a few days.
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All correct
Oct. 16, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
I think it went a little better this time.
But my writing is probably a bit too formal.
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I impressed, but more than that I felt sadness quietly. I was impressed, but more than that, I felt sadness quietly. "I impressed" means you impressed someone, but "I was impressed" means YOU were the one who was shocked. So, was impressed is correct. Comma after that I was impressed, but more than that I felt sadness quietly. Since "impressed" is a state of being it requires "was" (because this sentence is in past tense). I was quite impressed, but |
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I remember I bought some cheese that is famous at local for my family. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I remember I bought some Reworded to sound more natural I remember I bought some local cheese that is famous |
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