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TOMO_o

June 14, 2025

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What has been the best present you've ever received?

It has to be the leather glove that my grandfather gave me while he is alive. My grandfather was given by his father actually, so it's passed through for generations. Someday I would like to give it to my kid.

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It has to be thn my case, it was some leather gloves that my grandfather gave me while he is alive.

COMPARE: a leather glove → 右手用または左手用の手袋が1つだけ
some leather gloves → 両手用の手袋

My grandfather was given byreceived from his father actually, so it's have passed through for generations.

Someday I would like to give it to my kid.

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Interesting. I imagine the best gift I have received is my DNA: this life would not exist without DNA.

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TOMO_o

June 15, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

It has to be the leather glove that my grandfather gave me while he iswas still alive.

My grandfather was given byactually received it from his father actually, so it's passed throughdown for generations.

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TOMO_o

June 15, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

What has been the best present you've ever received?

It has to be the leather glove that my grandfather gave me while he iwas alive.

My grandfatherIt was given by his father actually, so it's has been passed through forthe generations.

Someday I would like to give it to my kid.

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TOMO_o

June 14, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

It has to be the leather glove that my grandfather gave me while he iwas alive.

My grandfather was given it by his father actually, so it's, so it has been passed down through for generations.

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TOMO_o

June 14, 2025

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Thank you very much for the careful correction.

What has been the best present you've ever received?

It has to be the leather glove that my grandfather gave me while he is aliverecently.

I changed the meaning a bit, since "while he is alive" can be a bit weird.

My grandfather was given the glove by his father actually, so it's passed through for generations.

Someday I would like to give it to my kid.

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TOMO_o

June 14, 2025

7

Thank you very much for the careful correction.

What has been the best present you've ever received?


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It has to be the leather glove that my grandfather gave me while he is alive.


It has to be the leather glove that my grandfather gave me while he is aliverecently.

I changed the meaning a bit, since "while he is alive" can be a bit weird.

It has to be the leather glove that my grandfather gave me while he iwas alive.

It has to be the leather glove that my grandfather gave me while he iwas alive.

It has to be the leather glove that my grandfather gave me while he iswas still alive.

It has to be thn my case, it was some leather gloves that my grandfather gave me while he is alive.

COMPARE: a leather glove → 右手用または左手用の手袋が1つだけ some leather gloves → 両手用の手袋

My grandfather was given by his father actually, so it's passed through for generations.


My grandfather was given the glove by his father actually, so it's passed through for generations.

My grandfather was given it by his father actually, so it's, so it has been passed down through for generations.

My grandfatherIt was given by his father actually, so it's has been passed through forthe generations.

My grandfather was given byactually received it from his father actually, so it's passed throughdown for generations.

My grandfather was given byreceived from his father actually, so it's have passed through for generations.

Someday I would like to give it to my kid.


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