Aug. 8, 2025
What happens after death?
I used to think that our souls would go to the sky and would be protected by God forever. However, I've changed my mind, I have no idea what happens after death and I'm really afraid of that. Is it like feeling asleep forever? Do you stop feeling anything? I don't know, it's something that we will never discover until we die, it's really sad.
I admire Christians because they are really optimists about this, some of them even look fordward to live the day they meet Jesus personally.
What happens after death?
I used to think that our souls would go to the sky and would be protected by God forever.
However, I've changed my mind,. I have no idea what happens after death, and I'm really afraid of that.
This is perhaps a cleaner way to keep these independent clauses together.
Is it like feeling asleep forever?
Do you stop feeling anything?
I don't know, it's something that we will never discover until we die, and it's really sad.
"and" added to help combine the last independent clause
I admire Christians because they are really optimists about this,; some of them even look fordward to live the day they meet Jesus personally.
A semicolon can perform the job of a period without having to start a new sentence. Something was needed to help combine the second independent clause
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Nice job articulating your position. I also have no idea what happens!
What hHappens aAfter dDeath?
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However, I've changed my mind,. I have no idea what happens after death and I'm really afraid of that.
Is it like feelbeing asleep forever?
I don't know, it'. It’s something that we will never discover until we die, it'. It’s really sad.
There are 3 thoughts here. You can join 2 of them with the conjunction, “and.”
For example,
“I don’t know, and it’s something that we will never discover until we die. It’s really sad.”
“I don’t know. It’s something that we will never discover until we die, and it’s really sad.”
I admire Christians because they are really optimistsic about this, s. Some of them even look fordward to live the day they meet Jesus personally.
Aug. 14, 2025
Thank you Fifi for your feedback
What happens after death?
I used to think that our souls would go to the sky and would be protected by God forever.
However, I've changed my mind, I have no idea what happens after death and I'm really afraid of that.
Is it like feeling asleep forever?
Do you stop feeling anything?
I don't know, it's something that we will never discover until we die, it's really sad.
I admire Christians because they are really optimistsic about this, some of them even look fordward to live the day they meeting Jesus personally. within their lifetime.
optimist = noun
optimistic = adjective
most of the time in english its
really + (adjective here)
really GOOD
really BAD
etc
Aug. 14, 2025
Thank you 7777!
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