What does the ending of Minecraft (actually) mean?

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Pieced; because you are referring to an action that has been completed, in the past tense, thus you must use the past participle.

On; because we regularly refer to things being on the screen when referring to programs, e.g. “Modern Family is on (the screen/tv)!”

You cannot say “we used to think”; because you cannot assume that the audience and you both interpreted this message in the same way. You could say, “and I used to think” because you are speaking truly for yourself/your opinion.

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For most of us, the ending of Minecraft is just a bunch of motivational phrases pieced together in a credits screen, and by the nature of these phrases, we usetend to think that this credit screen is telling to usus to "Go out and fill those lungs with fresh air".

But today I'm gonna introduce to you thisa theory that explains the ending of this wonderful game.

First of all, this is obviously this is not just a motivational screen, this is way deeper.

Allow me to say that this ending is perfect for a game like Minecraft, because it reminds us how big the game is, and in a very strange way, how big the life is too.

You see, these phrases say that there are two dreams in the everything; Minecraft and "the real life".

I'm not sure what you meant by "dreams" here.

They also say that we are made of the same materials of a star, yes!

Something as big as a star is made of the same material as us.

And finally, if we mix these ideas with the last phrase "wake up", we get a final message that it doesn't say "Go out and live and stop wasting your life" because according to the phrases, the real life and the game are equally important, but. Instead it says that we have all the tools that we need to make big things like a star, all we gothave to do is go out and get down ton it.

A simple but powerful message for a big game such as Minecraft is.

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Allow me to say that this ending is perfect for a game like Minecraft, because it reminds us how big the game is, and, in a very strange way, how big the life is too.

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Two dreams in the everything?

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"gonna" is not used in formal writing.

First of all, obviously this is not just a motivational screen, t. This is way deeper.

Allow me to say that this ending is perfect for a game like Minecraft, because it reminds us how big the game is, and, in a very strange way, how big the life is, too.

You see, these phrases say that there are two dreams in the everything;: Minecraft and "the real life".

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And fFinally, if we mix these ideas with the last phrase "wake up"," we get a final message that it doesn't say "Go out and live and stop wasting your life" because, according to the phrases, the real life and the game are equally important, butso instead it says that we have all the tools that we need to make big things like a star,: all we gothave to do is go out and get down ton it.

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