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Elielcan

April 1, 2025

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What do you think of people who treat dogs like people?

It's a subject I don't have much to say about because I'm not the person who likes to treat pets like humans but I have pets so I understand that many people find in their pets a fellow but I think they're different from humans, they lack reasoning and many other things that differentiate us from them.

In this way, for me seeing this kind of behavior in other people I've found that it's bad to them and also to the pet because a pet can't replace human company in any sense, it's not the same feeling to have someone human side-by-side with you than having a pet. But it is true that a pet can be with you through difficult moments and it is never going to leave you, this can make a bonding beyond a human can make.

This is why I think some people make so close connections with pets.

-- This is a "Writing Challenge" I make for my English Course, it's not a personal view, for me it's more about something to say in the writing. --

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What do you think of people who treat dogs like people?

It's a subject I don't have much to say about because I'm not the person who likes to treat pets like humans. but I have pets, so I understand that many people find in their pets a fellow buthuman. However, I think they're different from humans, they lack reasoning and many other things that differentiates us from them.

In this way, for me, seeing this kind of behavior in other people, I've found that it's bad tofor them a. And also to the pet because a pet can't replace human company in any sense, it's not the same feeling to have someone human side-by-side with you thand having a pet.

You could also say "... owning a pet"

But it is true that a pet can be with you through difficult moments and it is never going to leave you, t. This can make a bonding beyond a human can makone.

This is why I think some people make so close connections with pets.

-- This is a "Writing Challenge" that I makde for my English Course, i. It's not a personal view, f. For me, it's more about something to say in the writingwrite about.

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Well done!

It's a subject I don't have much to say about because I'm not the type of person who likes to treats pets like humans, but I have pets, so I can understand thathow many people find insee their pets as a fellow bcompanion. But, I think they're different from humans, because they lack reasoning and many other things that differentiate us from them.

In this way, for me to seeing this kind of behavior in other people, I've found that it's bad tofor them person and also to their pet because a pet can't replace human company in any sense, since it's not the same feeling toas haveing someone human side-by-side with you than having a pet.

ButHowever, it is true that a pet can be with you through difficult momentstimes, and it iswill never going to leave you, twhisch can make a bonding beyond a human can make. stronger than a bond with a human.

I only changed the “but” to “however” to add more variety to your transitions (but it makes sense so it’s optional :)

This is why I think some people make sohave such close connections with pets.

-- This is a "Writing Challenge" I makde for my English Course, it's not amy personal view,. for me, it's more about something to say in the writing.

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Overall, pretty good writing! :) Your message was clear. However, I noticed a mistake you made a couple times, and it’s called a comma splice. When you use a comma to connect two complete sentences, make sure to have a FANBOY before it. There’s a lot so I recommend you look up a chart for FANBOYS, But, it doesn’t hinder my understanding of your writing, so good job! :)

What do you think of people who treat dogs like people?

It's a subject I don't have much to say about because I'm not the person who likes to treat pets like humans but. I have pets so I understand that many people find in their pets a fellow, but I think they're different from humans, t. They lack reasoning and many other things that differentiate us from them.

Sentence is long so I divided it. I think you can say “many people find in their pets a fellow” but it kinda sounds weird and old fashioned (I’m American so I’m not sure about other dialects). I would more commonly hear something like “many people think their pets are their friends.”

In this way, for me to seeing this kind of behavior in other people, I've found that it's bad tofor them and also tofor the pet because a pet can't replace human company in any sense, i. It's not the same feeling to have someonea human side-by-side with you than having a pet.

I don’t feel like the transition phrase “in this way” fits here. Also “someone human” doesn’t make sense because they are both nouns. You can say “some human/a human/someone.”

But it is true that a pet can be with you through difficult moments and it is never going to leave you, t. This can make a bondingis a bond that goes beyond one a human can make.

This is why I think some people make souch close connections with pets.

-- This is a "Writing Challenge" I makde for my English Course, it's not a personal view, f. For me, it's more about something to say in the writing.

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In English writing, you have to make smaller sentences. It’s frowned upon to have super long sentences and they are called “run-on sentences.” In speaking it doesn't matter. Good job!

What dDo yYou tThink of pPeople wWho tTreat dDogs lLike pPeople?

For titles specifically, most words in a sentence are capitalized. (Except for words like prepositions or conjunctions—"of", "and", "but", "for", etc. This is UNLESS they are at the beginning of the sentence! In those cases, even words like those are capitalized in a title.

It'This is a subject I don't have much to say about because I'm not thea person who likes to treat pets like humans but I. However, I do have pets, so I understand thatwhy many people find insee their pets a fellow butmore like people. I think they're different from humans, though, since they lack reasoning and many other things that differentiate us from them.

"It's" can work, but "This is" sounds more natural here.

In this way, for me seeing this kind of behavior in other people I've found that it's bad to them and also to the pet becausI've found that treating pets like people is bad for both them and their owner. Since a pet can't fully replace human company in any sense, it's not the same feeling toas have someoneing a fellow human side-by-side with you than having a pet.

Excellent use of the hyphens ( - ) with side-by-side!

ButHowever, it is true that a pet can be with you through difficult moments and it is never going to leave you, this can make a bonding beyond a human can make. For some people, this is better than being with another person.

This is why I think some people can make souch close connections with pets.

-- This is a "Wwriting Cchallenge" I make forwas given by my English Ccourse, it's not a. These aren't my personal view, for me s—it's more about writing something to say in the writingfor this challenge for me.

What do you think of people who treat dogs like people?


What dDo yYou tThink of pPeople wWho tTreat dDogs lLike pPeople?

For titles specifically, most words in a sentence are capitalized. (Except for words like prepositions or conjunctions—"of", "and", "but", "for", etc. This is UNLESS they are at the beginning of the sentence! In those cases, even words like those are capitalized in a title.

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What do you think of people who treat dogs like people?

It's a subject I don't have much to say about because I'm not the person who likes to treat pets like humans but I have pets so I understand that many people find in their pets a fellow but I think they're different from humans, they lack reasoning and many other things that differentiate us from them.


It'This is a subject I don't have much to say about because I'm not thea person who likes to treat pets like humans but I. However, I do have pets, so I understand thatwhy many people find insee their pets a fellow butmore like people. I think they're different from humans, though, since they lack reasoning and many other things that differentiate us from them.

"It's" can work, but "This is" sounds more natural here.

It's a subject I don't have much to say about because I'm not the person who likes to treat pets like humans but. I have pets so I understand that many people find in their pets a fellow, but I think they're different from humans, t. They lack reasoning and many other things that differentiate us from them.

Sentence is long so I divided it. I think you can say “many people find in their pets a fellow” but it kinda sounds weird and old fashioned (I’m American so I’m not sure about other dialects). I would more commonly hear something like “many people think their pets are their friends.”

It's a subject I don't have much to say about because I'm not the type of person who likes to treats pets like humans, but I have pets, so I can understand thathow many people find insee their pets as a fellow bcompanion. But, I think they're different from humans, because they lack reasoning and many other things that differentiate us from them.

It's a subject I don't have much to say about because I'm not the person who likes to treat pets like humans. but I have pets, so I understand that many people find in their pets a fellow buthuman. However, I think they're different from humans, they lack reasoning and many other things that differentiates us from them.

In this way, for me seeing this kind of behavior in other people I've found that it's bad to them and also to the pet because a pet can't replace human company in any sense, it's not the same feeling to have someone human side-by-side with you than having a pet.


In this way, for me seeing this kind of behavior in other people I've found that it's bad to them and also to the pet becausI've found that treating pets like people is bad for both them and their owner. Since a pet can't fully replace human company in any sense, it's not the same feeling toas have someoneing a fellow human side-by-side with you than having a pet.

Excellent use of the hyphens ( - ) with side-by-side!

In this way, for me to seeing this kind of behavior in other people, I've found that it's bad tofor them and also tofor the pet because a pet can't replace human company in any sense, i. It's not the same feeling to have someonea human side-by-side with you than having a pet.

I don’t feel like the transition phrase “in this way” fits here. Also “someone human” doesn’t make sense because they are both nouns. You can say “some human/a human/someone.”

In this way, for me to seeing this kind of behavior in other people, I've found that it's bad tofor them person and also to their pet because a pet can't replace human company in any sense, since it's not the same feeling toas haveing someone human side-by-side with you than having a pet.

In this way, for me, seeing this kind of behavior in other people, I've found that it's bad tofor them a. And also to the pet because a pet can't replace human company in any sense, it's not the same feeling to have someone human side-by-side with you thand having a pet.

You could also say "... owning a pet"

But it is true that a pet can be with you through difficult moments and it is never going to leave you, this can make a bonding beyond a human can make.


ButHowever, it is true that a pet can be with you through difficult moments and it is never going to leave you, this can make a bonding beyond a human can make. For some people, this is better than being with another person.

But it is true that a pet can be with you through difficult moments and it is never going to leave you, t. This can make a bondingis a bond that goes beyond one a human can make.

ButHowever, it is true that a pet can be with you through difficult momentstimes, and it iswill never going to leave you, twhisch can make a bonding beyond a human can make. stronger than a bond with a human.

I only changed the “but” to “however” to add more variety to your transitions (but it makes sense so it’s optional :)

But it is true that a pet can be with you through difficult moments and it is never going to leave you, t. This can make a bonding beyond a human can makone.

This is why I think some people make so close connections with pets.


This is why I think some people can make souch close connections with pets.

This is why I think some people make souch close connections with pets.

This is why I think some people make sohave such close connections with pets.

This is why I think some people make so close connections with pets.

-- This is a "Writing Challenge" I make for my English Course, it's not a personal view, for me it's more about something to say in the writing.


-- This is a "Wwriting Cchallenge" I make forwas given by my English Ccourse, it's not a. These aren't my personal view, for me s—it's more about writing something to say in the writingfor this challenge for me.

-- This is a "Writing Challenge" I makde for my English Course, it's not a personal view, f. For me, it's more about something to say in the writing.

-- This is a "Writing Challenge" I makde for my English Course, it's not amy personal view,. for me, it's more about something to say in the writing.

-- This is a "Writing Challenge" that I makde for my English Course, i. It's not a personal view, f. For me, it's more about something to say in the writingwrite about.

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