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TOMO_o

July 17, 2025

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What do you think differentiates adults from children?

I don't know the answer to this question precisely. I think adults are the people who can take responsibility for their doing and saying. It doesn't matter about age or ability. I would like to be a generous person in the future.

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WhatOPTION A: How do you think differentiatesadults and children differ? OPTION B: What are the main differences between adults and children?¶
OPTION C: In what ways do
adults fromand children differ?

Many other options also exist . . . .

BETTER: I don't know thehow to answer to this question precisely.

I think adults are the people who can take responsibility for what theiry doing and saying.

SUGGESTION: Add this sentence to the previous sentence --
By contrast, children cannot.

It doesn't matter abouHowever, the main issue is not age or ability.

SUGGESTION: Add this sentence to the previous sentence --
The main issue is responsibility.

MY GUESS: I would like to be a generous and responsible person in the future.

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TOMO_o

July 18, 2025

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Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You write natural-sounding suggestions for each sentence, which really helps me understand.

I think adults are the peopleones who can take responsibility for what theiry doing and what they saying.

“People” is ok but you might be more likely to use “ones” in this context. You would say you take responsibility for “what you do” and “what you say” and this apples to most other verbs (although there are probably some exceptions to this like everything else in English!)

It doesn't matter about age or ability.

This is fine, particularly when it is not certain who you’re referring to, but you could say “it doesn’t matter about your/their age or ability” to make it flow a bit better and make it sound a bit more natural.

I would like to be a generous person in the future.

To make it sound a little less formal (if that’s the tone you’re intending), you could say “I’d” instead of “I would”.

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TOMO_o

July 17, 2025

5

Thank you very much for your careful corrections.
You write natural-sounding suggestions for each sentence, which really helps me understand.

I think adults are the people who can take responsibility for what theiry doing and saying.

ItAge or ability doesn't matter about age or ability.

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TOMO_o

July 17, 2025

5

Thank you for your careful corrections.

What do you think differentiates adults from children?


WhatOPTION A: How do you think differentiatesadults and children differ? OPTION B: What are the main differences between adults and children?¶
OPTION C: In what ways do
adults fromand children differ?

Many other options also exist . . . .

I don't know the answer to this question precisely.


BETTER: I don't know thehow to answer to this question precisely.

I think adults are the people who can take responsibility for their doing and saying.


I think adults are the people who can take responsibility for what theiry doing and saying.

I think adults are the peopleones who can take responsibility for what theiry doing and what they saying.

“People” is ok but you might be more likely to use “ones” in this context. You would say you take responsibility for “what you do” and “what you say” and this apples to most other verbs (although there are probably some exceptions to this like everything else in English!)

I think adults are the people who can take responsibility for what theiry doing and saying.

SUGGESTION: Add this sentence to the previous sentence -- By contrast, children cannot.

It doesn't matter about age or ability.


ItAge or ability doesn't matter about age or ability.

It doesn't matter about age or ability.

This is fine, particularly when it is not certain who you’re referring to, but you could say “it doesn’t matter about your/their age or ability” to make it flow a bit better and make it sound a bit more natural.

It doesn't matter abouHowever, the main issue is not age or ability.

SUGGESTION: Add this sentence to the previous sentence -- The main issue is responsibility.

I would like to be a generous person in the future.


I would like to be a generous person in the future.

To make it sound a little less formal (if that’s the tone you’re intending), you could say “I’d” instead of “I would”.

MY GUESS: I would like to be a generous and responsible person in the future.

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