Hi, I am Zhou Zeya, an exchange student from the University Putra Malaysia.

AI am a third-year student who is majoring in Business Administration.

Because of this ce Covid-19 epipandemic, I have been experiencundertaking two years of online classes.

During these two years, I just kept working in differenthave been working at several companies as an intern.

So I also have two years of working experience.

I take thisam taking a course forto improvinge my poor English.

"This course" isn't defined, so I'm unsure what you are referring to. "A course" makes more sense here.

I have to say I am really bad at English because in the past II used to spend more time on my job rather than on language learning.

Also, this is my first time getting into a real university and learning from you, I think I amfeel more like a year 1 student, a noobn amateur on this road.

"Noob" is too colloquial for this written context.

In addition, I am sorry for registering for this course so late because I just geot to know that there are some good language courses that can help me as a senior.

I registered for this course immediately when I know it whichas soon as I found out what day it is today, 7the 7th of September.

I'm not 100% what you mean with this sentence, so I hope my interpretation is correct.

I really don't want to be a guy who issomeone with an absentce.

"a guy" is too colloquial given the context.

Back to the topic at hand, there are many challenges for me with language learning as a noobn amateur:

I feel like Hkust offers a lot oftoo many things to me and I docan't really handle it.

I'm unsure what "Hkust" is.

Every course offers many stuffa lot of things that needs to dobe done.

"Stuff" is usually reserved for more casual speech. "Things" is more appropriate for the written form.

I am overwhelmed but I amalso trying to blend in.

2. My poor English basis.fundamentals

As Ipreviously said, I have not been learning the language for two years.

This is a big challenge for me to take on such a great academic English course.

It's a little vague what you mean by "great academic English course" here. Do you mean great as in big/ overwhelming, or do you mean great as in good/ useful?

When I geot into hkust, Iit feels like there are so many influential E(?) english Sspeakers, I feel lost when I trying to talk with them, because it feels like I wasam being tested by a very fast listening test.

Even though now, Grammer is keepings editing my errors whenas I am writing this honest feeling withly for you.

HowWhat poor English I have, but I will still pluck up tohe courage to study this course.

And I am very happy I can be taught by you and see you tomorrow.

I have to say that there are many reasons for language learning,earning a language, so before I start answering your questions, please allow me to introduce myself:

Just a couple small edits to make the sentence sound more natural and to connect your indeas.

AI am a third-year student who is majoring in Business Administration.

Because of this ce Covid-19 epidemic, I have been experiencinged two years of online classeslearning.

It's unusual to say you "experienced" a class (more usual to say that you "took" or "are taking" a class), so I've changed it to "experienced online learning".

During these two years, I just kept working inworked in a few different companies as an intern.

So I also have two years of working experience.

I takeam taking this course forin order to improvinge my poor English.

I have to say that I am really bad at English because in the past I spendedicated more time ton my job rather than to language learning.

Also, this is my first time getting into a real university and learning from you,. I think I am more like a first year 1 student, a noob on this road.

"Noob" is very much internet speak, you don't hear it much in real life!

In addition, I am sorry for registering for this course so late because I just get to knowonly just found out that there are some good language courses that can help me as a senior.

I registered for this course immediately when I knowas soon as I found out about it, which is today, 7 September.

I feel like Hkust offers a lot of things to me and I don't really handletake advantage of it.

Every course offers many stufftasks that needs to dobe done.

As I said, I have not been actively learning the language for two years.

I am very new into the academic areaworld.

ThisIt is a big challenge for me to takebe taking such a gpreatstigious and academic English course.

When I geot into hkust, I feelt like there awere so many influential English Speakers, I feelt lost when I trying to talk with them, like I was being tested by a very fast listening test.

I have changed this into past tense. It could also be in future tense - if you have yet to be accepted onto the course, I'm not sure which is the case.

Even though now, Grammer is keepingcontinues to editing my errors whilen I am writing this honest feeling with youmessage.

HowWhat poor English I have, but I will still pluck up tohe courage to study this course.

"Pluck up the courage" is a great phase!