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What do you like about your job?
I like that my job can involve several categories like vehicle factory, food factory, and logistics center. However, I really don't like my boss. Because his fun is only drinking, and he often says go drinking. I want to enjoy my life with my own way.
I like that my job can involve several categories likeis varied. I work with vehicle factoryies, food factoryies, and logistics centers.
"several categories" isn't the best word choice here. "Variety" might be a good noun for this, and the verb is "to vary." You could also say, "I like the variety in my job." Maybe someone else has a different suggestion.
If there is only one "logistics center" then, of course, it would be "and the logistics center."
Because his fun is onlyHis only idea of fun is drinking, and he often says, "Let's go for a drink."¶
The only thing he enjoys is drinking, and he often says goinvites us to go out drinking.
It is possible to start a sentence with "Because" but the grammar is a little more advanced. I think the reader understands that you are explaining why you don't like your boss, even if you don't use that word.
"idea of fun" is an idiomatic expression, and "his only idea of fun is __" sounds natural.
"go for a drink" is another idiomatic expression, as is "go out drinking"
I want to enjoy my life within my own way.¶
I want to enjoy my life my own way.
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You use informal language in this text, which makes it sound like you are talking. That's t why words like "really" and "thing" fit in well. In formal writing, you would use words more precisely.
What do you like about your job?
I like that my job can involve several categories like vehicle factory, food factory, and logistics center.
However, I really don't like my boss.
Because his way of having fun is only through drinking, and he often says gohe goes drinking.
I want to enjoy my life with in my own way.
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I like that my job can involve several categories like vehicle factory, food factory, and logistics center. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I like that my job "several categories" isn't the best word choice here. "Variety" might be a good noun for this, and the verb is "to vary." You could also say, "I like the variety in my job." Maybe someone else has a different suggestion. If there is only one "logistics center" then, of course, it would be "and the logistics center." |
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Because his fun is only drinking, and he often says go drinking. Because his way of having fun is only through drinking, and he often says
It is possible to start a sentence with "Because" but the grammar is a little more advanced. I think the reader understands that you are explaining why you don't like your boss, even if you don't use that word. "idea of fun" is an idiomatic expression, and "his only idea of fun is __" sounds natural. "go for a drink" is another idiomatic expression, as is "go out drinking" |
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I want to enjoy my life with my own way. I want to enjoy my life with in my own way. I want to enjoy my life |
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