April 16, 2020
What do you do for a living?
What do you do for a living?
I have finished my studies a year ago. In july, I found a job at a research center at the university. My job is to make a fruit juice which has a lot of benefits for human health.
The juice is make of little fruits (which grow mainly in Canada), diluted in maple water (which is also produce mainly in Canada).
To give benefits, I add some lactic bacteria to the juice, which will ferment the juice, and some bacteria are probiotics.
I have finished my studies a year ago.
In jJuly, I found a job at a research center at thea university.
My job is to make a type of fruit juice whichthat has a lot of benefits for human health.
The juice is makde up of little fruits (which grows mainly in Canada), diluted in maple water (which is also produced mainly in Canada).
To giveprovide further benefits, I add some lactic bacteria to the juice, which will ferments the juice, and some bacteria arethat acts as probiotics.
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Interesting!
What do you do for a living?
What do you do for a living?
I have finished my studies a year ago.
In jJuly, I found a job at a research center at the university.
My job is to make a fruit juice which has a lot of benefits for human health.
The juice is makde of little fruits (which grow mainly in Canada), diluted in maple water (which is also produced mainly in Canada).
To give additional benefits, I add some lactic bacteria to the juice, which will ferment the juice, and (some bacteria are probiotics.)
I shortened the first idea to not repeat the word juice.
I'm not sure in the last phrase if the lactic bacteria is a probiotic, or if you add another bacteria to act as a probiotic.
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Good job, the ideas come through
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To give benefits, I add some lactic bacteria to the juice, which will ferment the juice, and some bacteria are probiotics. To give additional benefits, I add some lactic bacteria I shortened the first idea to not repeat the word juice. I'm not sure in the last phrase if the lactic bacteria is a probiotic, or if you add another bacteria to act as a probiotic. To |
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