What Do Consumers Need?

The Creaticity, Innovation and Enterpreneurship competition is begining. There are routine track and pracitce track,and it counts seventeen racetracks through them.
They are Cross-border E-commerce, E-commerce Logistics, Internet Finance, Tourism E-commerce , Campus E-commerce ,Cross-border E-commerce Practical Competition, Industry-University-Application BUC Practical Competition, Business Big Data Analytics Practical Competition,etc.
My father suggest that I can consider of Cross-border E-commerce, because he major worked in foregin trade many years ago, and he still consentrate on it right now.
But I think that's too difficult for my team, I even don't know how to set a forign web, and I have no idea about what forigners need.
Can you tell me what consumers need most in your country?

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The Creaticvity, Innovation and Enterepreneurship competition is beginning.

There are routine tracks and pracitice track,s, and it counts seventeen racetracks through themthere are 17 tracks in total.

"racetracks" is used for specifically racing competitions (whether those competitions are for people, vehicles or animals).

They are Cross-border E-commerce, E-commerce Logistics, Internet Finance, Tourism E-commerce , Campus E-commerce , Cross-border E-commerce Practical Competition, Industry-University-Application BUC Practical Competition, Business Big Data Analytics Practical Competition, etc.

I didn't correct the titles of the tracks, as those might be the actual titles, but make sure to remember the space goes after the comma, not before.

My father suggested that I can consider of Cross-border E-commerce, because he major worked in foregign trade many years ago, and he still consentratefocuses on it right now.

But I think that's too difficult for my team, I even don't even know how to set a foreign web(?), and I have no idea about what foreigners need.

Now sure what you mean by "set a foreign web"

Can you tell me what consumers need most in your country?

Houses :) Might be a bit out of scope for your college project though!

What Do Consumers Need?

The Creaticvity, Innovation and Enterepreneurshipial competition is beginstarting.

Alternate suggestion (if you want to use begin):
"The Creativity, Innovation and Entrepreneurial competition has begun."

There are routine tracks and pracitice track,and it countss. There are a total of seventeen racetracks throughbetween/among them.

I don't think "racetracks" is the right word for what you're trying to say, maybe "industries"?

They are Cross-border E-commerce, E-commerce Logistics, Internet Finance, Tourism E-commerce , Campus E-commerce , Cross-border E-commerce Practical Competition, Industry-University-Application BUC Practical Competition, Business Big Data Analytics Practical Competition, etc.

My father suggests that I can consider ofdoing Cross-border E-commerce, because he major worked in foregign trade many years ago, and heis still conscentrateing on it right now.

But I think that's too difficult for my team,. I even don't know how to set-up a foreign web, and I have no idea about what foreigners need.

Can you tell me what consumers need most in your country?

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Good job! I think that communicating information about one's field of specialty can be really hard to do in another language. This is mostly because it requires a lot of field-specific jargon that is usually only learned by working in that field in that specific language. This might not be the best forum to practice/learn field-specific/highly technical topics.

What Do Consumers Need?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The Creaticity, Innovation and Enterpreneurship competition is begining.


The Creaticvity, Innovation and Enterepreneurshipial competition is beginstarting.

Alternate suggestion (if you want to use begin): "The Creativity, Innovation and Entrepreneurial competition has begun."

The Creaticvity, Innovation and Enterepreneurship competition is beginning.

There are routine track and pracitce track,and it counts seventeen racetracks through them.


There are routine tracks and pracitice track,and it countss. There are a total of seventeen racetracks throughbetween/among them.

I don't think "racetracks" is the right word for what you're trying to say, maybe "industries"?

There are routine tracks and pracitice track,s, and it counts seventeen racetracks through themthere are 17 tracks in total.

"racetracks" is used for specifically racing competitions (whether those competitions are for people, vehicles or animals).

They are Cross-border E-commerce, E-commerce Logistics, Internet Finance, Tourism E-commerce , Campus E-commerce ,Cross-border E-commerce Practical Competition, Industry-University-Application BUC Practical Competition, Business Big Data Analytics Practical Competition,etc.


They are Cross-border E-commerce, E-commerce Logistics, Internet Finance, Tourism E-commerce , Campus E-commerce , Cross-border E-commerce Practical Competition, Industry-University-Application BUC Practical Competition, Business Big Data Analytics Practical Competition, etc.

They are Cross-border E-commerce, E-commerce Logistics, Internet Finance, Tourism E-commerce , Campus E-commerce , Cross-border E-commerce Practical Competition, Industry-University-Application BUC Practical Competition, Business Big Data Analytics Practical Competition, etc.

I didn't correct the titles of the tracks, as those might be the actual titles, but make sure to remember the space goes after the comma, not before.

My father suggest that I can consider of Cross-border E-commerce, because he major worked in foregin trade many years ago, and he still consentrate on it right now.


My father suggests that I can consider ofdoing Cross-border E-commerce, because he major worked in foregign trade many years ago, and heis still conscentrateing on it right now.

My father suggested that I can consider of Cross-border E-commerce, because he major worked in foregign trade many years ago, and he still consentratefocuses on it right now.

But I think that's too difficult for my team, I even don't know how to set a forign web, and I have no idea about what forigners need.


But I think that's too difficult for my team,. I even don't know how to set-up a foreign web, and I have no idea about what foreigners need.

But I think that's too difficult for my team, I even don't even know how to set a foreign web(?), and I have no idea about what foreigners need.

Now sure what you mean by "set a foreign web"

Can you tell me what consumers need most in your country?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Can you tell me what consumers need most in your country?

Houses :) Might be a bit out of scope for your college project though!

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