July 15, 2025
What dissapointment of appointment
Today I went to an appointment and it was awfull. The Internet conecction was over and the doctor wasn't be able to assist me so I took a new appointment. it will be in four days.
on the other hand, yesterday I start an English practice with OpenAI because all of the other apps from IA they work trought pay so in this moment I don't have enough resources but it's ok, when you really want learning, you will find the way.
You know, today thought about the memories and wrote the following paragraph and I want share it with you.
The memories can look like pictures. Not big deal when they are living, lather with the frame of time and hexhibited on the homesickness gallery, they become really masterpieces.
Que decepcion de cita medica.
Hoy fui a una cita medica y fue terrible. la coneccion a Internet estaba fuera de servicio y el doctor no pudo atenderme asi que tome otra cita para dentro de cuatro dias.
Por otro lado, ayer inicie una practica de ingles con Open Ai porque las otras apps de IA son por pago y en este momento no tengo recursos suficientes pero esta bien, cuando realmente quieres aprender tu encontraras la manera.
Saben? hoy medite acerca de los recuerdos y escribi el siguiente parrafo y quiero compartirlo con ustedes.
Los recuerdos parecen pinturas. no gran cosa cuando son vividos, mas tarde con el marco del tiempo y exhibidos en la galeria de la nostalgia, se vuelven obras maestras.
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i kinda gave up i’m sorry 😓
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"Where there's a will, there's a way." Good luck!
July 17, 2025
thanks a lot
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changed it to title case and added "an" because the noun needs an article like that
Today I went to an appointment and it was awfull.
The Internet connecction was overdown and the doctor wasn't be able to assist me, so I tookmade a new appointment. that will be in four days.
If the internet was not working, then it was "down" or "not connecting."
"I made a new appointment" is an independent clause, so there has to be a comma before "so"
usually it is said that people "make" appointments or "take" specific appointment times
it will be in four days.
You could say "It will be in four days."
However, it works well naturally to add it right after you mention it the first time.
oOn the other hand, yesterday I started an English practice with OpenAI because all of the other AI apps from IA they work trought pay so in this momenrequire payment that I docan't have enough resourcesafford at this moment, but it's ok, when you really want to learning, you will find the way.
I changed it to "that I can't afford" because it is shorter and simpler (and more natural-sounding)
You know, today I thought about the memories and wrote the following paragraph, and I want share it with you.
"I want to share it with you." is an independent clause, so the comma had to be added in
general types of nouns don't usually have "the" in front like how they have "el/la" in Spanish
el arte becomes "art" and not "the art"
la música becomes "music" and not "the music"
but there are still are cases where we would have to write "the art" and "the music"
The mMemories can look like pictures.
same thing with "the"
NotThey are not a big deal when they are living, latherfresh, but with the frampassage of time and hexhibited on the hcomesickness gallery, they become reallying of nostalgia, they really become masterpieces.
memories that have just been created are usually called "fresh"
when time goes by it is usually "with time" or "in time" or "with the passage of time" or "with the passing of time"
"nostalgia" is the same in English
I found the "exhibited on the gallery" part a bit confusing, above is one way that I think captures your meaning and still sounds very natural
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Nice job sharing your reflections. You made me think about the nature of memories. Let me know if my corrections are wrong or unclear.
July 17, 2025
thank you so much for your corrections and attach the reasons. this help me a lot.
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it will be in four days.
You could say "It will be in four days." However, it works well naturally to add it right after you mention it the first time.
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on the other hand, yesterday I start an English practice with OpenAI because all of the other apps from IA they work trought pay so in this moment I don't have enough resources but it's ok, when you really want learning, you will find the way.
I changed it to "that I can't afford" because it is shorter and simpler (and more natural-sounding)
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You know, today thought about the memories and wrote the following paragraph and I want share it with you. You know, today I thought about "I want to share it with you." is an independent clause, so the comma had to be added in general types of nouns don't usually have "the" in front like how they have "el/la" in Spanish el arte becomes "art" and not "the art" la música becomes "music" and not "the music" but there are still are cases where we would have to write "the art" and "the music" You know, today thought about |
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The memories can look like pictures.
same thing with "the"
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Not big deal when they are living, lather with the frame of time and hexhibited on the homesickness gallery, they become really masterpieces.
memories that have just been created are usually called "fresh" when time goes by it is usually "with time" or "in time" or "with the passage of time" or "with the passing of time" "nostalgia" is the same in English I found the "exhibited on the gallery" part a bit confusing, above is one way that I think captures your meaning and still sounds very natural
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