April 6, 2020
What countries in Europe have you visited
I have visited several countries in Europe.
First, I have visited UK in the end of the 90´s, with my school. We visited London and some cities of the south of English.
Almost ten years later, I went to Belgium, twice. I visited Bruxelles, Bruges and Antwerten.
I have also visited Italy, I went to Torino. I would have prefered to visite Rome, Venise or Florence, but Torino was find.
Finaly, i have visited Czech Republic, I went to Prague. Unfortunatly, when I arrived in Prague, I felt sick. I vomited several times so I was not able to visit the city.
I have visited several countries in Europe.
First, I have visited the UK inat the end of the 90´s,s with my school.
Many people, including native speakers, put an apostrophe in 90s, 80s etc, but you do not need one.
We visited London and some cities of thein south ofern Englishand.
Almost ten years later, I went to Belgium, twice.
Finaly, i haveI visited Czech Republic, I went to PraguePrague in the Czech Republic/Czechia.
What countries in Europe have you visited?
I have visited several countries in Europe.
First, I have visited the UK inat the end of the 90´s, with my school.
You have visited several countries over a long period of time. This particular visit happened only once (because you specified “first”) so you visited the UK.
We visited London and some cities ofin the south east of Englishand.
English is an adjective. You need to use the noun England here.
Almost ten years later, I went to Belgium, twice.
I visited Bruxelles, Bruges and Antwerten.
I have also visited Italy,; I went to Torino.
(This is a very picky correction. It’s not too important so don’t worry about it — it’s even a common mistake for native English speakers!)
I would have prefered to visite Rome, Venise or Florence, but Torino was finde.
My correction now means “Torino was ok”. I’m not sure if this is what you meant?
Finally, iI have visited Czech Republic,; I went to Prague.
Unfortunatly, when I arrived in Prague, I felt sick.
I vomited several times so I was not able to visit the city.
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Looks good! I feel like several of the mistakes here were just typing errors, since you did them correctly elsewhere. If you want to know about the , -> ; thing, I believe it’s called a “comma splice”. I think the general idea is this: if a comma can be replaced by a full stop and it still makes sense, but you don’t want to make a new sentence, you should use a semicolon. It’s the kind of thing that our English teachers correct at school when we’re writing essays, but not many people care in reality...
Bad luck about your trip to Prague... hopefully you have another chance to go in the future!
What countries in Europe have you visited?
I have visited several countries in Europe.
First, I have visited UK in the end of the 90´'s, with my school.
If you are firmly situating the action in the past, use the imperfect (or past perfect, as needed). The present perfect describes "present" states, so you can't use it when adverbs or adverbial phrases that indicate that it happened in the past. Compare: "I fed the cat yesterday" and "I have fed the cat."
We visited London and some cities ofin the south of Englishand.
Almost ten years later, I went to Belgium, twice.
I visited Bruxellessels, Bruges and Antwertenp.
I have also visited Italy,. I went to Torino.
This is a run-on (these are two independent clauses) so you need to either separate them or use a colon or semi-colon (not recommended here since it does not work out logically).
I would have preferred to visite Rome, Venisce or Florence, but Torino was findhere we went.
When the verb infinitive ends with a single vowel and then a single consonant consonant, you need to double the consonant when adding -ed and -ing suffixes. (Otherwise it would imply a different pronunciation.) So hop → hopped and hopping, but hope → hoped and hoping.
Finally, iI have visited Czech Republic,. I went to Prague.
Unfortunately, when I arrived in Prague, I felt sick.
I vomited several times so I was not able to visitexperience the city.
You already "visited" the city since you went there, so "experience" (or "get a chance to explore") would be better.
April 6, 2020
I think you confused Antwerpen (Dutch spelling) with Antwerp.
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First, I have visited UK in the end of the 90´s, with my school. First, I If you are firmly situating the action in the past, use the imperfect (or past perfect, as needed). The present perfect describes "present" states, so you can't use it when adverbs or adverbial phrases that indicate that it happened in the past. Compare: "I fed the cat yesterday" and "I have fed the cat." First, I You have visited several countries over a long period of time. This particular visit happened only once (because you specified “first”) so you visited the UK. First, I Many people, including native speakers, put an apostrophe in 90s, 80s etc, but you do not need one. |
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We visited London and some cities of the south of English. We visited London and some cities We visited London and some cities English is an adjective. You need to use the noun England here. We visited London and some cities |
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Almost ten years later, I went to Belgium, twice. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I visited Bruxelles, Bruges and Antwerten. I visited Bru This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have also visited Italy, I went to Torino. I have also visited Italy This is a run-on (these are two independent clauses) so you need to either separate them or use a colon or semi-colon (not recommended here since it does not work out logically). I have also visited Italy (This is a very picky correction. It’s not too important so don’t worry about it — it’s even a common mistake for native English speakers!) |
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I would have prefered to visite Rome, Venise or Florence, but Torino was find. I would have preferred to visit When the verb infinitive ends with a single vowel and then a single consonant consonant, you need to double the consonant when adding -ed and -ing suffixes. (Otherwise it would imply a different pronunciation.) So hop → hopped and hopping, but hope → hoped and hoping. I would have prefered to visit My correction now means “Torino was ok”. I’m not sure if this is what you meant? |
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I vomited several times so I was not able to visit the city. I vomited several times so I was not able to You already "visited" the city since you went there, so "experience" (or "get a chance to explore") would be better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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