Aug. 6, 2025
What Comes with a Pencil 鉛筆が可能にすること
Since entering university, I have mostly used pens for writing. But now, I find myself using pencils more and more.
Although sharpening them can be a bit of a hassle, pencils offer many advantages. Most obviously, they are erasable. You can draw faint, delicate lines or write with strong, bold strokes. I find that pages filled with pencil marks have a quiet beauty of their own.
Pencil writing, unlike pen, seems to reflect the passage of time and the layering of thought. Like a candle that gradually melts as it burns, a pencil visibly shortens as you use it — a small but tangible record of your thinking and effort.
In the morning, lining up a few freshly sharpened pencils on my desk feels like a ritual — a quiet act of readiness for a day of reading and writing.
大学に入学して以来、筆記用具と言えばペンだった。しかし今、鉛筆を多用している。
鉛筆はいちいち削らなければならないことが大きな欠点だが、利点もたくさんある。一番大きなことが、消せること。そして薄く書くこともできるし、力強く書くこともできる。鉛筆の書き込みがされたページも美しいと思う。鉛筆書きは、ペンで書くよりも、時間の経過や考えの層のようなものが表現さできるように思う。ろうそくのように使えば使うほど残りが物理的に減っていくのは鉛筆の宿命だけど、自分がどれくらい書いてきたかを証明するものでもある。朝、手元にいくつかのとがった鉛筆を用意することは、読んで書くことに対する自分の意志を整えるようなことでもあるのかもしれない。
What Comes with a Pencil 鉛筆が可能にすること
This title is fine, but it wouldn't be my first choice. Maybe "What Using a Pencil Brings" or "What Comes with Using a Pencil"
Since entering university, I have mostly used pens for writing.
But now, I find myself using pencils more and more.
Although sharpening them can be a bit of a hassle, pencils offer many advantages.
Most obviously, they are erasable.
You can draw faint, delicate lines or write with strong, bold strokes.
I find that pages filled with pencil marks have a quiet beauty of their own.
Pencil writing, unlike pen, seems to reflect the passage of time and the layering of thought.
Like a candle that gradually melts as it burns, a pencil visibly shortens as you use it — a small but tangible record of your thinking and effort.
In the morning, lining up a few freshly sharpened pencils on my desk feels like a ritual — a quiet act of readiness for a day of reading and writing.
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You write so well!
I personally prefer pens because I think it makes my writing look more impressive, haha.
Aug. 8, 2025
Thank you! That's true. Pens are more versatile.
What Comes with a Pencil 鉛筆が可能にすること
Since enterstarting university, I have mostly used pens for writing.
"starting" would be the best to use when beginning something, rather than "entering" which mostly means going into a place.
But nowHowever, I find myself using pencils more andeven more.
Its not formal starting your sentences with "but"
Although sharpening them can be a bit of a hassle, pencilsthey offer many advantages.
try using more pronouns when referring to a noun multiple times to avoid repetition
Most obviously, they are erasable.
"most" exaggerates a word, unless that was your intention, its not best to use it too much because it can become a mouthful
You can draw faint, delicate lines, or write with strong, bold strokes.
when commas enclose a phrase it represents extra information
I find that pages filled with pencil marks have a quiet beauty of their own.
Pencil writing, unlike pen, seems to reflect the passage of time and the layering of thought.
great use of commas!
Like a candle that gradually melts as it burns, a pencil visibly shortens as you use it — a small but tangible record of your thinking and effort.
In the morning, lining up a few freshly sharpened pencils on my desk feels like a ritual — a quiet act of readiness for a day of reading and writing.
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very beautiful writing, I really like the use of adjectives!
Aug. 7, 2025
Thank you for the useful information!
What Comes with a Pencila Pencil Makes Possible 鉛筆が可能にすること
The title is ok, but a better title might be something like this or "What Pencils make possible" Depending on the feeling you wish to convey.
Since entering university, I have mostly used pens for writing.
This is good and doesn't need any changes. For US English, you would say, "Since starting college,..." For some reason in the US everyone "goes to college" or "goes to a university" but elsewhere in the world people "enter university" English is fun!
But now, I find myself using pencils more and more.
Although sharpening them can be a bit of a hassle, pencils offer many advantages.
Most obviously,One of the most obvious advantages is that they are erasable.
You can draw faint, delicate lines or write with strong, bold strokes.
PencilWriting writingh a pencil, unlike a pen, seems to reflect the passage of time and the layering of thought.
I love how this phrased: "the passage of time and the layering of thought."
Like a candle that gradually melts as it burns, a pencil visibly shortens as you use it — a small but tangible record of your thinking and effort.
In the morning, lining up a few freshly sharpened pencils on my desk feels like a ritual — a quiet act of readiness for a day of reading and writing.
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小学生の時、鉛筆の残り（ささがき？）を捨てることはいい匂い、懐かしいですね。
Emptying the sharpener in the classroom...takes me back to grade school.
Aug. 7, 2025
Thank you! I also like the smell of pencil shavings(鉛筆のけずりカス). Next time, I’ll use "Since starting college" or "Since going to college" instead!
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Since entering university, I have mostly used pens for writing. Since entering university, I have mostly used pens for writing. This is good and doesn't need any changes. For US English, you would say, "Since starting college,..." For some reason in the US everyone "goes to college" or "goes to a university" but elsewhere in the world people "enter university" English is fun! Since "starting" would be the best to use when beginning something, rather than "entering" which mostly means going into a place. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But now, I find myself using pencils more and more. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Its not formal starting your sentences with "but" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Although sharpening them can be a bit of a hassle, pencils offer many advantages. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Although sharpening them can be a bit of a hassle, try using more pronouns when referring to a noun multiple times to avoid repetition This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Most obviously, they are erasable.
"most" exaggerates a word, unless that was your intention, its not best to use it too much because it can become a mouthful This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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You can draw faint, delicate lines or write with strong, bold strokes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! You can draw faint when commas enclose a phrase it represents extra information This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I find that pages filled with pencil marks have a quiet beauty of their own. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Pencil writing, unlike pen, seems to reflect the passage of time and the layering of thought.
I love how this phrased: "the passage of time and the layering of thought." Pencil writing, unlike pen, seems to reflect the passage of time and the layering of thought. great use of commas! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Like a candle that gradually melts as it burns, a pencil visibly shortens as you use it — a small but tangible record of your thinking and effort. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In the morning, lining up a few freshly sharpened pencils on my desk feels like a ritual — a quiet act of readiness for a day of reading and writing. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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