July 5, 2025
What color are your eyes?
My eyes are a dark-brown which are common in Japan.I've been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful. However I'm proud of my eyes recently. I think these are not bad.
My eyes are a dark- brown which areis common in Japan. I've been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful.
I think thesey are not bad.
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Mine are blue which are the most common here (though my mother's are green and my father's and brother's are brown - my mother's parents' eyes were both blue though).
My eyes are a dark- brown, which areis common in Japan.I've I used to been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful.
However, I'm proud of my eyes recently.
I think thesey are not bad.
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My eyes are a light brown. I'm jealous of people with blue and green eyes, too!
July 6, 2025
Thank you very much for the careful correction.
My eyes are a dark-brown which areis common in Japan.I've been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful.
However, recently, I'm proud of my eyes recently.
I think thesey are not bad.
July 5, 2025
Thank you very much for the careful correction.
My eyes are a dark- brown, which areis common in Japan. I've been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes in the past because they are beautiful.
adding in the past makes the sentence sound more natural
However, I'mve recently been proud of my eyes recently.
sounds more natural
I think thesey are not bad.
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Good job :)
July 5, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Your explanations of each step are very helpful.
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My eyes are a dark-brown which areis common in Japan. I've always been so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes because they are beautiful.
The which refers to a 'dark-brown' colour which is singular. Added 'always' to give an idea of the amount of time otherwise it sounds a little off.
However I'm, recently I've become proud of my eyes recently.
Sounds better with 'recently' at the beginning. Changed verb to become and perfect tense. Some that happened in recent past and is now 'over'.
I think thesey are non't bad.
'they' is better 'these' sounds like you are pointing out something close to you. You can use "aren't" as a abbreviation for "are not".
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Good work. Main corrections are for verb forms.
My eyes are a dark- brown which areis common in Japan.I've been I am so jealous of people who have green or blue eyes, because they are beautiful colors.
You don't need a hyphen for "dark brown" or the article "a." Make sure to include a space between sentences.
However I'm, recently I have become proud of my eyes recently.
I think thesey are not bad.
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Very easy to understand! Keep going and practicing.
July 5, 2025
Thank you very much for your careful corrections. Your explanations of each step are very helpful.
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