April 27, 2020
What Closed-door Policy caused in japan
I recommend you to make friends with foreign people at least one. Having no friend from abroad is extremely unusual in a global society. In Japan, however, it is usual and common. That is because Japan had been so closed society that almost no country bad never contacted.
学生時代に、一人だけでよいから外国人の親しい友人を持ちなさい、と言いたい。そうした友人がいないこと自体が、世界の尺度に当てはめてみれば、きわめて異常なことだ。これも日本が永年、世界から隔絶された、閉鎖的な社会であったからである。
What the Closed-door Policy caused in japan
If you're specifically referring to the Sakoku policy (https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sakoku), you should say "Sakoku policy".
When you are a student, I recommend you to make friends with foreign people at least at least one foreign persone.
学生時代に=when you are/were a student.
Having no friends from abroad is extremely unusual in a global society.
In Japan, however, it is usual and commona common occurrence.
"usual" isn't really used like this. Rather than "X is usual", I would say "X is typical." I removed it here because the repetition felt a bit odd.
That is because Japan had been soused to be a closed society that almost no country bad nfew countries ever contacted.
I would combine this with the previous sentence: "In Japan, however, it is a common occurence, because Japan used to be a closed society that few countries ever contacted."
April 27, 2020
thank you!!
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What Closed-door Policy caused in japan What the Closed-door Policy caused in japan If you're specifically referring to the Sakoku policy (https://simple.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sakoku), you should say "Sakoku policy". |
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I recommend you to make friends with foreign people at least one. When you are a student, I recommend you 学生時代に=when you are/were a student. |
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Having no friend from abroad is extremely unusual in a global society. Having no friends from abroad is extremely unusual in a global society. |
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In Japan, however, it is usual and common. In Japan, however, it is "usual" isn't really used like this. Rather than "X is usual", I would say "X is typical." I removed it here because the repetition felt a bit odd. |
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That is because Japan had been so closed society that almost no country bad never contacted. That is because Japan I would combine this with the previous sentence: "In Japan, however, it is a common occurence, because Japan used to be a closed society that few countries ever contacted." |
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