Aug. 26, 2025
What Career is Relatively Fair?
Many times, I look back on my life and ask myself "what career do I really want to pursue?"
When I was in school, I studied very hard and I often got high scores in my class, even in the whole school. So I think learning is fair. As long as you study hard, you will get good academic grades.
I like playing table tennis. It's also a very fair sport. If you practice hard, you can make great progress and you can defeat many other players.
I had the experience of running a small business. I found that if you work hard and you are capable, you can make money all the time. So it's also a fair career.
I have been working for the government for years and I don't think it's a fair career. In China, people can't become rich as government employees if they don't engage in corruption, so the only thing that shows their progress is to get promoted frequently.
However, if people don't have a relationship with their higher - ups who can lift them, they won't be promoted no matter how capable they are or how hard they work.
Therefore, in order to get promoted, many people have been trying very hard to get to know the top leaders of their administrative region, fawning on them and currying favor with them to get promoted. Anyway, that works very well.
So if people don't want to get closer to the leaders, they won't be promoted throughout their entire life.
The former top leader of my city once said, "How can I promote you before I know you?" Yes, in some ways, it's true. He has sentenced to death due to his corruption.
What Career is Relatively Fair?
Many times, I look back on my life and ask myself, "wWhat career do I really want to pursue?"
When I was in school, I studied very hard and I often got high scores in my class, even inamong the whole school.
So I think learning is fair.
In your post, "fair" means merit-based, equitable, honest etc. But fair has several meanings in English, so it might be good to clarify which meaning of "fair" you are using with a synonym.
As long as you study hard, you will get good academic grades.
I like playing table tennis.
It's also a very fair sport.
If you practice hard, you can make great progress and you canwill be able to defeat many other players.
I had the experience of running a small business.
I found that if you work hard and you are capable, you can make money all the time.
So it's also a fair career.
However, I have been working for the government for years and I don't think it's a fair career.
You can use a connection phrase like "however" to flow better.
In China, people can't become rich as a government employees if they don't engage in corruption, so t. The only thing that shows their progress is to get promoted frequently.
However, if people don't have a good relationship with their higher - -ups who can lifsupport them, they won't be promoted no matter how capable they are or how hard they work.
Therefore, in order to get promoted, many people have been trying veto try hard to get to know the top leaders of their administrative region, fawning onver them and currying favor with them to get promoted.
You used "to get promoted" a couple times too many here.
Anyway, that works very well.
SoBut if people don't want to get closer to the leaders, they won't be promoted throughout their entire life.
The former top leader of my city once said, "How can I promote you before I know you?"
Yes, in some ways, it's true.
He has been sentenced to death due to his corruption.
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Very well-written! And a very interesting topic.
Aug. 26, 2025
Thank you very much .
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What Career is Relatively Fair? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Many times, I look back on my life and ask myself "what career do I really want to pursue?" Many times, I look back on my life and ask myself, " |
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So I think learning is fair. So I think learning is fair. In your post, "fair" means merit-based, equitable, honest etc. But fair has several meanings in English, so it might be good to clarify which meaning of "fair" you are using with a synonym. |
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In China, people can't become rich as government employees if they don't engage in corruption, so the only thing that shows their progress is to get promoted frequently. In China, people can't become rich as a government employee |
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However, if people don't have a relationship with their higher - ups who can lift them, they won't be promoted no matter how capable they are or how hard they work. However, if people don't have a good relationship with their higher |
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Anyway, that works very well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As long as you study hard, you will get good academic grades. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I found that if you work hard and you are capable, you can make money all the time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So it's also a fair career. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have been working for the government for years and I don't think it's a fair career. However, I have been working for the government for years and I don't think it's a fair career. You can use a connection phrase like "however" to flow better. |
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So if people don't want to get closer to the leaders, they won't be promoted throughout their entire life.
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He was sentenced to death in 2004 due to his corruption. |
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When I was in school, I studied very hard and I often got high scores in my class, even in the whole school. When I was in school, I studied very hard and I often got high scores in my class, even |
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I like playing table tennis. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's also a very fair sport. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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If you practice hard, you can make great progress and you can defeat many other players. If you practice hard, you can make great progress and you |
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I had the experience of running a small business. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, in order to get promoted, many people have been trying very hard to get to know the top leaders of their administrative region, fawning on them and currying favor with them to get promoted. Therefore, in order to get promoted, You used "to get promoted" a couple times too many here. |
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The former top leader of my city once said, "How can I promote you before I know you?" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Yes, in some ways, it's true. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He has sentenced to death due to his corruption. He has been sentenced to death due to his corruption. |
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