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sergio

March 26, 2023

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What can we do to help the environment of our local area?

We can do our part to protect and save the environment. Although this issue might seem too much for to us to handle, there are a large number of actions and activities in which we are able to take part. Firstly, you can do things at home to help the environment, such as reducing water and energy consumption, sorting your garbage or using sustainable means of transport to reduce your carbon footprint. Secondly, you can give financial support to environmental organizations in your city or join with them in green initiatives.
In conclusión, by incorporating these or other practises individually into your daily routine, you could have a positive impact on the local environment and also create a possible better and sustainable future for the next generations.

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What can we do to help the environment of our local area?

Although this issue might seem too much for to us to handle, there are a large number of actions and activities in which we are able to take part.

Firstly, you can do things at home to help the environment, such as reducing water and energy consumption, sorting your garbage or using sustainable means of transport to reduce your carbon footprint.

Secondly, you can give financial support to environmental organizations in your city or join with them in green initiatives.

In conclusión, by incorporating these or other practisces individually into your daily routine, you couldan have a positive impact on the local environment and also create a possiblepossibly create a better and sustainable future for the next generations.

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Very well done!

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sergio

March 27, 2023

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Thanks!

What can we do to help the environment of our local area?

We can do our part to protect and save the environment.

Although this issue might seem too much for to us to handle, there are a large number of actions and activities in which we are able to take part in.

or it would sounds more natural like this: "which we can take part in"

Firstly, you can do things at home (to help the environment), such as reducing water and energy consumption, sorting your garbage or using sustainable means of transport to reduce your carbon footprint.

You don't need to repeat "to help the environment" as you already mentioned it.

Secondly, you can give financial support to environmental organizations in your city or join in with them in green initiatives.

or "join them in green initiatives"

In conclusión, by incorporating these or other practises individually into your daily routine, you could have a positive impact on the local environment and also create a possibley better and sustainable future for the next generations.

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Great writing! It was enjoyable to read :)

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sergio

March 26, 2023

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Thanks a million!

What can we do to help the environment of our local area?


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We can do our part to protect and save the environment.


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Although this issue might seem too much for to us to handle, there are a large number of actions and activities in which we are able to take part.


Although this issue might seem too much for to us to handle, there are a large number of actions and activities in which we are able to take part in.

or it would sounds more natural like this: "which we can take part in"

Although this issue might seem too much for to us to handle, there are a large number of actions and activities in which we are able to take part.

Firstly, you can do things at home to help the environment, such as reducing water and energy consumption, sorting your garbage or using sustainable means of transport to reduce your carbon footprint.


Firstly, you can do things at home (to help the environment), such as reducing water and energy consumption, sorting your garbage or using sustainable means of transport to reduce your carbon footprint.

You don't need to repeat "to help the environment" as you already mentioned it.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Secondly, you can give financial support to environmental organizations in your city or join with them in green initiatives.


Secondly, you can give financial support to environmental organizations in your city or join in with them in green initiatives.

or "join them in green initiatives"

Secondly, you can give financial support to environmental organizations in your city or join with them in green initiatives.

In conclusión, by incorporating these or other practises individually into your daily routine, you could have a positive impact on the local environment and also create a possible better and sustainable future for the next generations.


In conclusión, by incorporating these or other practises individually into your daily routine, you could have a positive impact on the local environment and also create a possibley better and sustainable future for the next generations.

In conclusión, by incorporating these or other practisces individually into your daily routine, you couldan have a positive impact on the local environment and also create a possiblepossibly create a better and sustainable future for the next generations.

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