Aug. 9, 2021
What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and
During this era, some people work in tourism as a principal income in their lives. It is easy to notice that tourism is expanding around the world. This action brings a lot of benefits to people and communities, I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, tourism can bring a cultural exchange between the locals and foreigners in countries or societies. Just imagine a foreigner travelling to Asia and stay a week alone. That person probably will learn some culture about that place. My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. I am from Ecuador, and I remember when I arrived to Taiwan, during my first day I used chopsticks to eat my lunch. It was so difficult because it was the first time that I used those chopsticks, but after some weeks, as a result, I could handle it and right now I can use chopsticks very well. So, only this small habit, I could learn through use chopsticks the Asian culture.
Furthermore, I think that people from communities far away of cities can get some money selling their products to foreigners or people from other cities. For instance, in Ecuador there are many small communities that always sell handicraft things made by them, and foreigners are very interested because there are not in other places. I remember when I was a kid, I travelled with my family to those places, and we not only bought some handicrafts, but also tasted local food. How can it consider a benefit? Well, at that moment there were many people from different parts of Ecuador, even foreigners. And local people not only gain money, but also share their culture through those handicrafts or food.
In conclusion, I believe the tourism industry can get many benefits not only to local people but also to visitors who want to explore a new culture.
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What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and What In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjetives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title. |
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During this era, some people work in tourism as a principal income in their lives.
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It is easy to notice that tourism is expanding around the world. It "It is" is often said/written as "it's". |
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This action brings a lot of benefits to people and communities, I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
"I will" is often said/written as "I'll". |
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To begin with, tourism can bring a cultural exchange between the locals and foreigners in countries or societies. To begin with, tourism can |
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Just imagine a foreigner travelling to Asia and stay a week alone. Just imagine a foreigner travelling to Asia and staying a week alone. |
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That person probably will learn some culture about that place. That person probably will learn some of the culture |
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My personal experience is a compelling illustration of this. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am from Ecuador, and I remember when I arrived to Taiwan, during my first day I used chopsticks to eat my lunch. I am from Ecuador, and I remember when I arrived "I am" is often said/written by "I'm". |
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It was so difficult because it was the first time that I used those chopsticks, but after some weeks, as a result, I could handle it and right now I can use chopsticks very well. It was so difficult because it was the first time that I used |
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So, only this small habit, I could learn through use chopsticks the Asian culture. So |
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Furthermore, I think that people from communities far away of cities can get some money selling their products to foreigners or people from other cities. Furthermore, I think that people from communities |
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For instance, in Ecuador there are many small communities that always sell handicraft things made by them, and foreigners are very interested because there are not in other places. For instance, in Ecuador, there are many small communities that always sell hand |
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I remember when I was a kid, I travelled with my family to those places, and we not only bought some handicrafts, but also tasted local food. I remember when I was a kid, I travelled with my family to those places, and we not only bought some |
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How can it consider a benefit? How can it be considered a benefit? |
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Well, at that moment there were many people from different parts of Ecuador, even foreigners. Well, at that |
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And local people not only gain money, but also share their culture through those handicrafts or food. And local people not only gained money, but they also shared their culture through those hand |
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In conclusion, I believe the tourism industry can get many benefits not only to local people but also to visitors who want to explore a new culture. In conclusion, I believe the tourism industry can |
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