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GThe guitar is one of the things that makes me happy, because when I sing, I splashinglet out all my feelings and worries and exchangingtransform it into music, it can noticed by side.

By the way, I also like to listening to music, I'm choosing it by and I choose it according to my mood.

So in conclusion, I can say that music and creation something by my own easierplaying is a big part of my life

First of allor me, I have a lot of hobbies, but I can mark theone of the most notable ones is playing onthe guitar.

"First of all" does make sense, but "for me" kinda sounds better here in my opinion.


I saw another guy correcting the usage of "mark" as "one of the ones I wanted to speak about" or something like that, and that also works well.

Guitar is one of the things that makes me happy, because when I sing, I splashing outplay, I can transform all of my feelings and worries and exchanging it into music, it can noticed by sideinto music.

You might want to say something like, guitar is one of the things that make you *most* happy, and not just happy? Like "Guitar is one of the things that makes me the most happy" or "Guitar is one of the things that makes me most happy"

I did not understand the meaning of "it can be noticed by side."

By the way, I like to listening to music, I'm choosing it by as well. I usually choose the song based on my mood.

I saw another guy correct it like this bit this is honestly a really good correction.

So in conclusion, I canwould say that music and creation something by my own easier alistening to and creating my own music are big parts of my life.

"So in conclusion" makes it sound like an essay, but this is just a short post with a few sentences. It might be better to simply say something like "Listening to and creating my own music really are big parts of my life. Just food for thought.

First of all, I have a lot of hobbies, but I can mark the. One of them is playing onthe guitar.

GPlaying the guitar is one of the things that makes me happy, because when I sing, I splashing outrelease all my feelings and worries and exchanging it into music, it can noticed by sideinto the music.

I don't understand the last statement so I deleted it.

By the way, I like to listening to music,. I'm choosing it bye the song depending on my mood.

To listening is not correct, but to listen is.

So iIn conclusion, I can say that music and creation something by my own easiersongwriting is a big part of my life

Do you mean songwriting? Because I don't understand.

First of all, I have a lot of hobbies, but the one I cwan mark thet to speak about is playing onthe guitar.

I wasn't really sure what you meant by "mark" in this case. I'm guessing it's maybe the one you wanted to single out and discuss in this post?

Guitar is one of the things that makes me happy, because when I sing, I splashingpour out all my feelings and worries and exchanging it into music, it can noticed by side.into the music.

We usually talk about feelings/emotions "pouring out" or "spilling over" rather than "splashing"

I didn't really understand the meaning of that last part.

By the way, I like to listening to music, I'm choosing it by as well. I usually choose the song based on my mood.

In cases like this, if you are going to use the word "to", the verb that follows it should not end with "-ing"
You can either say "I like listening to music" OR "I like to listen to music"
You cannot say "to listening"

Additionally, we would say "am choosing" if it was an action we are doing right now. If we are talking about something we generally or usually do, then rather say "I choose"

So in conclusion, I canwould say that music and creationg something byon my own easier(or: "being creative") is a big part of my life.

First of all, I have a lot of hobbies, but I can mark theand one of them is playing on guitar.

Sorry, I didn't really understand what you were trying to convey there. But changing the phrase to "and one of them" implies that out of all your hobbies, guitar is just one of them.

Guitar is one of the things that makes me happy, because when I sing, I am splashing out all my feelings and worries and exchangturning it into music, it can noticed by side.

Put "is" in between "Guitar" and "one" because "one of the things that makes me happy" modifies "Guitar".

Put a "am" in between the pronoun and the progressive verb

Exchanging --> turn. Exchange sounds like you're giving something and receiving music, turning sounds like you're *transforming* your feelings into music (The dictionary should also tell you the difference).

I don't understand the final phrase.

By the way, I like to listening to music, I'm so I choosinge it by my mood.

"to listening" is wrong because "to" indicates the next verb is infinitive which shouldn't have the "-ing" ending.

Replace the "," with "so" to create a smoother transition.

"I'm choosing --> I choose because "I'm choosing" (the progressive tense) implies that you are doing that action at the moment.

So in conclusion, I can say that music and creationg something byon my own easier is a big part of my life

"creation" is a noun so change it into the verb "creating"