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sergio

March 16, 2023

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What are your heroes? Why do you admire him/her/them?

In many ways, my heroes are my parents. I know it sounds really cheesy but they have helped me throughout my life. When I was at school we didn't have enough money to pay the school fees, so they had to borrow money from the bank. Additionally, they haven't only supported me financially, but also in a affective way. They have been with me whenever I have needed it.

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Whato are your heroes? Why do you admire him/her/them?

In many ways, my heroes are my parents.

I know it sounds really cheesy but they have helped me throughout my life.

When I was at school, we didn't have enough money to pay the school fees, so they had to borrow money from the bank.

Additionally, they haven't only supported me financially, but also in a affective waemotionally.

They have been with me whenever I have needed it.

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sergio

March 16, 2023

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Thanks!

What are your heroes? Why do you admire him/her/them?


Whato are your heroes? Why do you admire him/her/them?

In many ways, my heroes are my parents.


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I know it sounds really cheesy but they have helped me throughout my life.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I was at school we didn't have enough money to pay the school fees, so they had to borrow money from the bank.


When I was at school, we didn't have enough money to pay the school fees, so they had to borrow money from the bank.

Additionally, they haven't only supported me financially, but also in a affective way.


Additionally, they haven't only supported me financially, but also in a affective waemotionally.

They have been with me whenever I have needed it.


They have been with me whenever I have needed it.

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