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Solen

Oct. 7, 2025

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What are the benefits of doing nothing ?

Doing nothing is often seen like bad. If we look at animals, we can think they are always moving. For example, bees that go from flowers to flowers. But, like lions, who love kicking back, they also love to do nothing. And it can be benefic. If we observe the ants, they look always moving and very organised like a tiny industrie. But they also do nothing sometimes if they don't need to. Moreover, I think, if we never get bored, we wouldn't invent the fire or other important things because we wouldn't wonder what could we do to invent fire. So, I think sometimes it's important to do nothing and just chill because life is fast and we have to enjoy it and take some break. Thanks for reading!

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What are the benefits of doing nothing ?

Doing nothing is often seen like badas a bad thing.

If we look at animals, we can think they arethey seem to always be moving.

I have two cats who are exceptions! 😆

For example, bees that go from flowers to flowers.

But, like lions, who love kicking back, theybees also lohave to do nothingperiods of inactivity.

I’m not certain if I understand your sentence, but I believe this is what you meant. I could be wrong.

And itdoing nothing can be beneficial.

If we observe the ants, they lookseem to be always moving and verstrictly organiszed, like a tiny industriey in and of itself.

I added “in and of itself” because that’s a natural-sounding figure of speech here, but it is not necessary.

But theyants also do nothing sometimes if they don't need twhen they have nothing to do.

Moreover, I think, if we never get bored, we wouldn't invent thehave discovered fire or made other important thingadvances because we wouldn't wonder what could we do to invent firenever wonder how.

I erased the last few words because it sounded like circular reasoning. In English, the more common collocation for fire is “discover,” not “invent.” We prefer to use “invent” for machines.

So, I think sometimes it's important to do nothing and just chill because l. Life is fast and w. We have to enjoy it and take some breaks.

Thanks for reading!

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You have a good start here! If you’re interested in some English reading practice, “In Praise of Idleness” by Bertrand Russell is a famous paper on this topic that had a profound effect on me. Good luck!

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Jordan_Said

Oct. 8, 2025

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Oh! One big difference between French and English: in English, punctuation is never set apart with spaces. That’s the only thing I can remember from the few weeks I tried to learn French!

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Solen

Oct. 8, 2025

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Do you find my english is good ?
Every day, I listen a 6-minute English transmission and I recap it here to train my orale comprehension and my writting expression

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Jordan_Said

Oct. 8, 2025

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I think so. I certainly think you're doing everything good to improve, and I think you will improve!

If we look at animals, we can thinkbelieve they are always moving.

For example, bees that go from flowers to flowers.

But, like lions, who love kicking back, they also love to do nothing.

And itDoing nothing can be beneficial.

If we observe the ants, they look they're always moving and v. Very organiszed like a tiny industries.

But they also do nothing sometimes if they don't need to., sometimes, if there is nothing to be done, they do nothing.

Moreover, I think, if we never get bored, wthere wouldn't invent thbe things like fire or other important thinginventions because we wouldn't wonder what could we do to inventour boredom would not give us the idea to make the fire.

So, I think sometimes it's important to do nothing and just chill, because life is fast and we have to enjoy it and take somea break.

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I agree with you! Relaxing, being bored and taking the time to do nothing are really important. I fixed a few "mistakes" but they are just for clarity and conveying the same thing more naturally. Your original writing is understandable too!

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Solen

Oct. 8, 2025

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Do you find my english is good ?(Honesty)

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langkat

Oct. 8, 2025

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So far, your English is good!

So, I think sometimes it's important to do nothing and just chill because life is fast and we have to enjoy it and take some break.


So, I think sometimes it's important to do nothing and just chill, because life is fast and we have to enjoy it and take somea break.

So, I think sometimes it's important to do nothing and just chill because l. Life is fast and w. We have to enjoy it and take some breaks.

Thanks for reading!


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What are the benefits of doing nothing ?


What are the benefits of doing nothing ?

Doing nothing is often seen like bad.


Doing nothing is often seen like badas a bad thing.

If we look at animals, we can think they are always moving.


If we look at animals, we can thinkbelieve they are always moving.

If we look at animals, we can think they arethey seem to always be moving.

I have two cats who are exceptions! 😆

For example, bees that go from flowers to flowers.


For example, bees that go from flowers to flowers.

For example, bees that go from flowers to flowers.

But, like lions, who love kicking back, they also love to do nothing.


But, like lions, who love kicking back, they also love to do nothing.

But, like lions, who love kicking back, theybees also lohave to do nothingperiods of inactivity.

I’m not certain if I understand your sentence, but I believe this is what you meant. I could be wrong.

And it can be benefic.


And itDoing nothing can be beneficial.

And itdoing nothing can be beneficial.

If we observe the ants, they look always moving and very organised like a tiny industrie.


If we observe the ants, they look they're always moving and v. Very organiszed like a tiny industries.

If we observe the ants, they lookseem to be always moving and verstrictly organiszed, like a tiny industriey in and of itself.

I added “in and of itself” because that’s a natural-sounding figure of speech here, but it is not necessary.

But they also do nothing sometimes if they don't need to.


But they also do nothing sometimes if they don't need to., sometimes, if there is nothing to be done, they do nothing.

But theyants also do nothing sometimes if they don't need twhen they have nothing to do.

Moreover, I think, if we never get bored, we wouldn't invent the fire or other important things because we wouldn't wonder what could we do to invent fire.


Moreover, I think, if we never get bored, wthere wouldn't invent thbe things like fire or other important thinginventions because we wouldn't wonder what could we do to inventour boredom would not give us the idea to make the fire.

Moreover, I think, if we never get bored, we wouldn't invent thehave discovered fire or made other important thingadvances because we wouldn't wonder what could we do to invent firenever wonder how.

I erased the last few words because it sounded like circular reasoning. In English, the more common collocation for fire is “discover,” not “invent.” We prefer to use “invent” for machines.

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