Aug. 15, 2025
WHAT AM I WATCHING ON MY HOLIDAYS?
Hi guys, today I wanted to talk about what I'm watching in my freetime because in summer I don't have anything to do.
When I was a kid, I used to watch Adventure Time, I think that all of you had already heard about this series as it became really famous. It was really entertaining but I got older and I didn't care about how this series ended. In spite of this, three weeks ago, I saw a tiktok about Adventure Time and I knew that I had to start it again and to finally finish it.
Most of people think that this series aimed at young people, nothing could be futher from the truth; firts seasons are simple and infantile (I also enjoyed this part) however, it has a deep plot inside it. I do recommend it.
Hi guys, today I wanted to talk about what I'm watching in my free time because induring the summer I don't have anynothing to do.
- during the summer/winter/autumn etc is a more proper way to write than 'in summer/winter/autumn etc'. In would be used by lazy people when they speak i.e all natives but for written text 'during the summer' is preferable to 'in summer'
- I don't have anything to do = I have nothing to do. The latter sounds more fluid and easier to read though because you don't have the double negative of the former sentence
When I was a kid, I used to watch Adventure Time, I think that all of you hadve alreadl probably heard aboutof this series as it became really famous.
- Adding the word 'probably' makes the sentence sound much more fluid because you start with 'I think that ...' which in this context means you're not 100% sure so adding 'probably' fits here and makes the sentence sound way more natural
- 'you have all' is also far more natural to say that 'all of you have'
- Changed tense from had to have because 'had' is used when you're talking about something that happened in the past before something else in the past.
It was really entertaining but I got older and I didn't care about how thise series ended.
- this is technically fine but 'the' would be a far more common word choice
In spite of this, three weeks ago, I saw a tiktok about Adventure Time and I knew that I had to start it again and to finally finish it.
- remove 'to' to make it sound less formal (to fit in with the rest of the text)
Most of people think that this series is aimed at young people, but nothing could be further from the truth;. The firtst seasons are simple and infantile (I also enjoyed this part) however, it has a deep plot inside it.
- Adding but here for sentence flow. Any time you want to connect two ideas that are opposed to each other, always use connecting words like 'but', 'even though', 'although' to connected the two ideas. Examples: 'He was having a good time but he had to leave early', 'Although she didn't like the movie, she stayed until the end', 'Even though he hates pumpkin, he likes pumpkin soup'
Aug. 15, 2025
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Hi guys, today I wanted to talk about what I'm watching in my freetime because in summer I don't have anything to do. Hi guys, today I wanted to talk about what I'm watching in my free time because - during the summer/winter/autumn etc is a more proper way to write than 'in summer/winter/autumn etc'. In would be used by lazy people when they speak i.e all natives but for written text 'during the summer' is preferable to 'in summer' - I don't have anything to do = I have nothing to do. The latter sounds more fluid and easier to read though because you don't have the double negative of the former sentence |
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When I was a kid, I used to watch Adventure Time, I think that all of you had already heard about this series as it became really famous. When I was a kid, I used to watch Adventure Time, I think that - Adding the word 'probably' makes the sentence sound much more fluid because you start with 'I think that ...' which in this context means you're not 100% sure so adding 'probably' fits here and makes the sentence sound way more natural - 'you have all' is also far more natural to say that 'all of you have' - Changed tense from had to have because 'had' is used when you're talking about something that happened in the past before something else in the past. |
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It was really entertaining but I got older and I didn't care about how this series ended. It was really entertaining but I got older and I didn't care about how th - this is technically fine but 'the' would be a far more common word choice |
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In spite of this, three weeks ago, I saw a tiktok about Adventure Time and I knew that I had to start it again and to finally finish it. In spite of this, three weeks ago, I saw a tiktok about Adventure Time and I knew that I had to start it again and - remove 'to' to make it sound less formal (to fit in with the rest of the text) |
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Most of people think that this series aimed at young people, nothing could be futher from the truth; firts seasons are simple and infantile (I also enjoyed this part) however, it has a deep plot inside it. Most of people think that this series is aimed at young people - Adding but here for sentence flow. Any time you want to connect two ideas that are opposed to each other, always use connecting words like 'but', 'even though', 'although' to connected the two ideas. Examples: 'He was having a good time but he had to leave early', 'Although she didn't like the movie, she stayed until the end', 'Even though he hates pumpkin, he likes pumpkin soup' |
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I do recommend it. |
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