Feb. 14, 2025
I feel happy when I have a dinner with my family. I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend we can have a great time with talking and laughing.
Whaaten Do You Feel Happy?
Either "When Do You Feel Happy?" or "What *Makes* You Happy"
When do you feel happy ◎
When makes you happy X
What makes you feel happy ○
What makes you happy ◎
What do you feel happy X
I feel happy when I have a dinner with my family.
a -> []: "dinner" is a label for the event of eating a dinner meal. Thus either
I feel happy when I have a dinner meal with my family △ <- grammatically correct but unnatural
I feel happy when I have dinner with my family ◎ <- the most natural way
I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend we cans I have a great time with talking and laughing eating dinner with my family.
weekend -> weekends: you mention weekdays (the label), so we mention weekends (the label):
I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends ◎
I always eat dinner alone on the weekdays, but on the weekends ◎
I always eat dinner alone on the weekday, but on the weekend △
I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend X
we can have a great time with talking and laughing -> I have a great time with talking and laughing eating* dinner with my family:
This entire entry is about you, so the most natural way to talk is to keep the subject on you. Thus we change it from "we" to "I".
*talking and laughing eating dinner = talking and laughing [while] eating dinner: "while" is omitted here and implied, though both are correct
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Great English! Watch your plurals
Whaaten Do You Feel Happy?
I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time withhen talking and laughing.
Whaaten Do You Feel Happy?
I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time with talking and laughing.
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Great work!
Whaat Do You Feel Happy?
Or "What makes you happy?"
I feel happy when I have a dinner with my family.
"A" dinner makes it seem like a formal, unusual event, which I expect it isn't in this context.
I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time with talking and laughing.
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Nicely written. It's great to fully enjoy time with family and realize how lucky you are!
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Whaat Do You Feel Happy?
Or "What makes you happy?" Wh Wh Wh Either "When Do You Feel Happy?" or "What *Makes* You Happy" When do you feel happy ◎ When makes you happy X What makes you feel happy ○ What makes you happy ◎ What do you feel happy X |
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I feel happy when I have a dinner with my family. I feel happy when I have "A" dinner makes it seem like a formal, unusual event, which I expect it isn't in this context. I feel happy when I have a -> []: "dinner" is a label for the event of eating a dinner meal. Thus either I feel happy when I have a dinner meal with my family △ <- grammatically correct but unnatural I feel happy when I have dinner with my family ◎ <- the most natural way |
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I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend we can have a great time with talking and laughing. I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time w I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, weekend -> weekends: you mention weekdays (the label), so we mention weekends (the label): I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends ◎ I always eat dinner alone on the weekdays, but on the weekends ◎ I always eat dinner alone on the weekday, but on the weekend △ I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend X we can have a great time with talking and laughing -> I have a great time with talking and laughing eating* dinner with my family: This entire entry is about you, so the most natural way to talk is to keep the subject on you. Thus we change it from "we" to "I". *talking and laughing eating dinner = talking and laughing [while] eating dinner: "while" is omitted here and implied, though both are correct |
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