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TOMO_o

Feb. 14, 2025

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Whaat Do You Feel Happy?

I feel happy when I have a dinner with my family. I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend we can have a great time with talking and laughing.

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Whaaten Do You Feel Happy?

Either "When Do You Feel Happy?" or "What *Makes* You Happy"

When do you feel happy ◎
When makes you happy X
What makes you feel happy ○
What makes you happy ◎
What do you feel happy X

I feel happy when I have a dinner with my family.

a -> []: "dinner" is a label for the event of eating a dinner meal. Thus either

I feel happy when I have a dinner meal with my family △ <- grammatically correct but unnatural
I feel happy when I have dinner with my family ◎ <- the most natural way

I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend we cans I have a great time with talking and laughing eating dinner with my family.

weekend -> weekends: you mention weekdays (the label), so we mention weekends (the label):

I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends ◎
I always eat dinner alone on the weekdays, but on the weekends ◎
I always eat dinner alone on the weekday, but on the weekend △
I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend X


we can have a great time with talking and laughing -> I have a great time with talking and laughing eating* dinner with my family:

This entire entry is about you, so the most natural way to talk is to keep the subject on you. Thus we change it from "we" to "I".

*talking and laughing eating dinner = talking and laughing [while] eating dinner: "while" is omitted here and implied, though both are correct

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Great English! Watch your plurals

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TOMO_o

Feb. 15, 2025

18

Thank you very much for the careful correction.

Whaaten Do You Feel Happy?

I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time withhen talking and laughing.

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TOMO_o

Feb. 15, 2025

18

Thank you for the correction.

Whaaten Do You Feel Happy?

I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time with talking and laughing.

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Great work!

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TOMO_o

Feb. 15, 2025

18

Thank you for the correction.

Whaat Do You Feel Happy?

Or "What makes you happy?"

I feel happy when I have a dinner with my family.

"A" dinner makes it seem like a formal, unusual event, which I expect it isn't in this context.

I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time with talking and laughing.

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Nicely written. It's great to fully enjoy time with family and realize how lucky you are!

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TOMO_o

Feb. 15, 2025

18

Thank you for the careful correction.

Whaat Do You Feel Happy?


Whaat Do You Feel Happy?

Or "What makes you happy?"

Whaaten Do You Feel Happy?

Whaaten Do You Feel Happy?

Whaaten Do You Feel Happy?

Either "When Do You Feel Happy?" or "What *Makes* You Happy" When do you feel happy ◎ When makes you happy X What makes you feel happy ○ What makes you happy ◎ What do you feel happy X

I feel happy when I have a dinner with my family.


I feel happy when I have a dinner with my family.

"A" dinner makes it seem like a formal, unusual event, which I expect it isn't in this context.

I feel happy when I have a dinner with my family.

a -> []: "dinner" is a label for the event of eating a dinner meal. Thus either I feel happy when I have a dinner meal with my family △ <- grammatically correct but unnatural I feel happy when I have dinner with my family ◎ <- the most natural way

I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend we can have a great time with talking and laughing.


I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time with talking and laughing.

I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time with talking and laughing.

I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends we can have a great time withhen talking and laughing.

I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend we cans I have a great time with talking and laughing eating dinner with my family.

weekend -> weekends: you mention weekdays (the label), so we mention weekends (the label): I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekends ◎ I always eat dinner alone on the weekdays, but on the weekends ◎ I always eat dinner alone on the weekday, but on the weekend △ I always eat dinner alone on weekdays, but on weekend X we can have a great time with talking and laughing -> I have a great time with talking and laughing eating* dinner with my family: This entire entry is about you, so the most natural way to talk is to keep the subject on you. Thus we change it from "we" to "I". *talking and laughing eating dinner = talking and laughing [while] eating dinner: "while" is omitted here and implied, though both are correct

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