Jan. 31, 2021
Part Time Job as a Tutor
When I was a university student, I taught math, scientific subjects, and English as a tutor. Even people who can't speak English was able to teach grammar and simple sentences. One of my students appeared to grow up in deprived environment. I was terribly sorry for earning from his single mother.
However, I also disgusted that the son was unwilling to study diligently. Though I know that most things learned at school are useless in daily life, I guess that being good at studying something is essential to develop one's career. Fortunately, most Japanese people aren't good at English, acquiring English test certification isn't easy but effective way to get job. Skills which require a lot of efforts are great advantage.
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Part Time Job as a Tutor
When I was a university student, I taught math, scientific subjects, and English as a tutor.
Even people who can't speak English wasere able to teach grammar and simple sentences.
Even people who can't speak English were able to teach grammar and simple sentences.
One of my students appeared to grow up in a deprived environment. One of my students appeared to grow up in a deprived environment.
I was terribly sorry for earningreceiving money from his single mother.
I was terribly sorry for receiving money from his single mother.
We don't usually use "to earn" in this way.
However, I was also disgusted that the son was unwilling to study diligently. However, I was also disgusted that the son was unwilling to study diligently.
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Though I know that most things learned at school are useless in daily life, I guess that being good at studying something is essential toin developing one's career.
Alternative:
Though I know that most things learned at school are useless in daily life, I guess that being good at studying something is essential in developing one's career.
Fortunately, mMost Japanese people aren't good at English, a. Acquiring an English test certification isn't easy but, fortunately, an effective way to get a job.
Most Japanese people aren't good at English. Acquiring an English test certification isn't easy but, fortunately, an effective way to get a job.
We put "fortunately" right before the positive benefit.
Skills which require a lot of efforts are great advantages.
Skills which require a lot of effort are great advantages.
We rarely use the word "effort" as a plural noun. I think it's because it's an abstract noun.
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Even people who caouldn't speak English wasere able to tleachrn grammar and simple sentences.
Even people who couldn't speak English were able to learn grammar and simple sentences.
One of my students appeared to have grown up in deprived environment. One of my students appeared to have grown up in deprived environment.
Fortunately, most Japanese people aren't good at English, a. Acquiring English test certification isn't easy but it is an effective way to get a job.
Fortunately, most Japanese people aren't good at English. Acquiring English test certification isn't easy but it is an effective way to get a job.
Skills whichthat require a lot of efforts are a great advantage.
Skills that require a lot of effort are a great advantage.
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When I was a university student, I taught math, scientific subjects, and English as a tutor. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Even people who can't speak English was able to teach grammar and simple sentences.
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One of my students lived with his single mother in deprived area. |
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I was terribly sorry for earning from this family. |
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However, I also disgusted that the son was unwilling to study diligently. However, I was also disgusted that the son was unwilling to study diligently. However, I was also disgusted that the son was unwilling to study diligently. |
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Though I know that most things learned at school are useless in daily life, I guess that being good at studying something is essential to develop one's career.
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Though I know that most things learned at school are useless in daily life, I guess that being good at studying something is essential |
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Fortunately, most Japanese people aren't good at English, acquiring English test certification isn't easy but simple way to get job. |
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Skills which require a lot of efforts are great advantage.
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Skills which require a lot of effort We rarely use the word "effort" as a plural noun. I think it's because it's an abstract noun. |
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Fortunately, most Japanese people aren't good at English, acquiring English test certification isn't easy but effective way to get job.
Fortunately, most Japanese people aren't good at English
We put "fortunately" right before the positive benefit. |
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Part Time Job as a Tutor This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One of my students appeared to grow up in deprived environment. One of my students appeared to have grown up in deprived environment. One of my students appeared to have grown up in deprived environment. One of my students appeared to grow up in a deprived environment. One of my students appeared to grow up in a deprived environment. |
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I was terribly sorry for earning from his single mother.
I was terribly sorry for We don't usually use "to earn" in this way. |
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