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West World

West world

If you are a fan of SF drama, you must watched.

Season 4 just launched!

Thanks to the “die hard” fan, I watched a one full hour explain season 1-3 video.

In fact that really prove I am not a fan at all.

I never understand the story like they do.

In fact I never understand the message from this drama.

Thanks to them, now I not only understand the drama and even the second time watch season 1-3.

The joy is actually more than the first time to watch this drama.

Looking forward for more excitement in season4.

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If you are a fan of SFscience fiction dramas, you must watche West World.

Season 4 just launchreleased!

'Launched' is also okay to use, but 'released' is used more commonly.

Thanks to the “Since I'm a die -hard fan, I watched a one full 1 hour video explaining seasons 1-3 video.

In fact, thatis really proves I am not a fan at all.

In fact I never understand the message from this dramais drama's message either.

Thanks to them, now Iose videos, not only did I understand the drama and even the second timebut I also watched seasons 1-3 a second time.

The joy is actually more than the first time to watch this dramaWatching West World more than once is actually part of the joy.

It would be good to write West World instead of 'this drama' so that readers remember the subject you're referring to. I also rephrased the sentence here to make it seem more natural.

Looking forward forto more excitement in season4. 4!

If you are a fan of SFscience fiction dramas, you must watche West World.

Haven't seen SF used for "science fiction", not sure if it's common.

Season 4 just launchedcame out!

You can also say "Season 4 was just released!"

Thanks to thOne die -hard fan, I watched a one made a full -hour video explaining seasons 1-3 video.

In fact, that reallyvideo proved I am not a fan at all.

I never understanood the story likeas much as they doid.

In fact, I never understanood the message ofrom this drama.

Thanks to them, now I not only do I now understand the drama and even the second time , but it even made me rewatch seasons 1-3.

Not too sure what you mean here by "even the second time watch season 1-3." but I took a guess.

The joy is actuallyI got rewatching it was even more than the first time to watch this dramaI saw it.

Looking forward for more excitement into season 4.

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Good job!

West World


West world


If you are a fan of SF drama, you must watched.


If you are a fan of SFscience fiction dramas, you must watche West World.

Haven't seen SF used for "science fiction", not sure if it's common.

If you are a fan of SFscience fiction dramas, you must watche West World.

Season 4 just launched!


Season 4 just launchedcame out!

You can also say "Season 4 was just released!"

Season 4 just launchreleased!

'Launched' is also okay to use, but 'released' is used more commonly.

Thanks to the “die hard” fan, I watched a one full hour explain season 1-3 video.


Thanks to thOne die -hard fan, I watched a one made a full -hour video explaining seasons 1-3 video.

Thanks to the “Since I'm a die -hard fan, I watched a one full 1 hour video explaining seasons 1-3 video.

In fact that really prove I am not a fan at all.


In fact, that reallyvideo proved I am not a fan at all.

In fact, thatis really proves I am not a fan at all.

I never understand the story like they do.


I never understanood the story likeas much as they doid.

In fact I never understand the message from this drama.


In fact, I never understanood the message ofrom this drama.

In fact I never understand the message from this dramais drama's message either.

Thanks to them, now I not only understand the drama and even the second time watch season 1-3.


Thanks to them, now I not only do I now understand the drama and even the second time , but it even made me rewatch seasons 1-3.

Not too sure what you mean here by "even the second time watch season 1-3." but I took a guess.

Thanks to them, now Iose videos, not only did I understand the drama and even the second timebut I also watched seasons 1-3 a second time.

The joy is actually more than the first time to watch this drama.


The joy is actuallyI got rewatching it was even more than the first time to watch this dramaI saw it.

The joy is actually more than the first time to watch this dramaWatching West World more than once is actually part of the joy.

It would be good to write West World instead of 'this drama' so that readers remember the subject you're referring to. I also rephrased the sentence here to make it seem more natural.

Looking forward for more excitement in season4.


Looking forward for more excitement into season 4.

Looking forward forto more excitement in season4. 4!

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