Feb. 19, 2024
West Lake
I went to West Lake last Saturday. It's very close to the museum where I saw the exhibition.
What a beautiful place! No wonder so many ancient poets wrote poems about it.
I took a video. You can find it here https://studio.youtube.com/video/YhXXBZFzvWI
I hope you will like it too.
西湖
上周六我去了西湖，离我看展的馆不远。
真是个美丽的地方呀，难怪那么多古代的骚人墨客都为它写诗。
我拍了个视频，你可以在这里看：https://studio.youtube.com/video/YhXXBZFzvWI
愿你也喜欢。
West Lake
I went to West Lake last Saturday.
It's very close to the museum where I saw the exhibition.
What a beautiful place!
No wonder so many ancient poets wrote poems about it.
I took a video.
You can find it here https://studio.youtube.com/video/YhXXBZFzvWI I hope you will like it too.
It's very close to the museum where I saw thean exhibition.
what exhibition?
No wonder so many ancient poets wrote poems about it.
not wrong but a little unnatural "ancient poets" could maybe be changed to like "classical"
Feb. 21, 2024
Thank you for your correction！
West Lake
I went to West Lake last Saturday.
It's very close to the museum where I saw the exhibition.
This sentence is confusing because you haven't mentioned what exhibition you're talking about.
What a beautiful place!
No wonder so many ancient poets wrote poems about it.
I took a video.
You can find it here https://studio.youtube.com/video/YhXXBZFzvWI
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I hope you will like it too.
Feb. 21, 2024
Thank you for your correction！
West Lake
I went to West Lake last Saturday.
It's very close to the museum where I saw thewent to see an exhibition.
You haven't mentioned an exhibition previously so we don't know which exhibition you're talking about, hence "an" instead of "the"
What a beautiful place!
No wonder so many ancient poets wrote poems about it.
I took a video.
You can find it here https://studio.youtube.com/video/YhXXBZFzvWI I hope you will like it too.
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Feb. 21, 2024
Thank you！
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