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viktoriia

Oct. 12, 2023

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We're free people!

Today I woke up so late (at 10 a.m.). After I ran, breathed fresh air and went home. While I was walking home, I thought, how much we depend on opinions other people. It’s not okay. If we going to be free, self-sufficient and just happy - we have to understand, that we are free people right now. If we want to doing sport – do it, if we want to smile, while we’re walking down the street – do it. Nobody else can’t make our life happy. Only you can manage it.
But, I still think about people’s thoughts. In one side, I don’t care about it, but in another side – I do. I really try to be absolutely selfish person. But if I write it, I’m not. I wish you independence and freedom to choose the path you want to live. I’m sure, that all people deserve it.

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We're free, people!

Today I woke up so late (at 10 a.m.).

After I ran, breathedwent for a run and got some fresh air and, I went home.

While I was walking home, I thought, about how much we depend on opinions other people.

It’s not okay.

If we going to be free, self-sufficient and just happy - we have to understand, that we are free people r. Right now.

If weyou want to doingtake up sports – do it, if weyou want to smile, while we’en you're walking down the street – just do it.

Nobody else can’t make your life happy. and fulfilling.

Only you can manage it.That's on you.

ButThat said, I still think about people’s thoughts.

IOn one side, I don’tthe one hand, I don't (want to) care about it, but ion anthe other side – I do.

I really try to be absolute totally selfish person.

But if I write it, I’mhad to say whether I am or not, I’m probably not.

I wish you the independence and freedom to choose the pathlife you want to live.

I’m sure, that aAll people deserve it.that, I'm sure.

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Generally agree. It's important to make yourself happy but a big part of being fulfilled (in my opinion) is responsibility to something greater, be it family, work, or a social cause.

We're free people!

Today I woke up sovery / really late, (at 10 a.m.).

After I ran,went for a run, I breathed the fresh air and went home.

While I was walking home, I thought, about how much we depend on the opinions's of other people.

It’s not okay.

If we going to be free, self-sufficient andor just happy - we have to understand, that we are free people right now.

If we want to doing sports we can do it, i. If we want to smile, while we’re walking down the street – we can do it.

Nobody else can’t make our life happy.

Only youwe can manage it.

But, I still think about people’s thoughts.

InOn the one sidehand, I don’t care about it, but ion anthe other side – I do.

I really try to be absolutely selfish truly independent person.

Selfish has a very negative meaning. Try this instead.

But if I write it,about it, then I’m not.

I wish you independence and freedom to choose the path you want to live.

I’m sure, that all people deserve it.

After I ran,went for a run and breathed in some fresh air and, I went home.

While I was walking home, I thought, about how much we depend onrely on the opinions of other people.

If we want to doing a sport – do it, if we want to smile, while we’re walking down the street – do it.

Nobody else can’t make our life happy.

OR: "can make us unhappy"

IOn one sidehand, I don’t care about it, but ion anthe other side –hand I do.

I really try to be an absolutely selfish confident person.

I wouldn't use selfish here - it implies that someone is rude or inconsiderate because of their own self interest. It seems like you're talking more about self confidence, or you could also say "high self esteem" maybe :)

I wish you independence and freedom to choose the path you want to live.

I’m sure, that all people deserve it.

Feedback

Great work! Very interesting topic to write about :)

We're free people!


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We're free, people!

Today I woke up so late (at 10 a.m.).


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Today I woke up sovery / really late, (at 10 a.m.).

After I ran, breathed fresh air and went home.


After I ran,went for a run and breathed in some fresh air and, I went home.

After I ran,went for a run, I breathed the fresh air and went home.

After I ran, breathedwent for a run and got some fresh air and, I went home.

While I was walking home, I thought, how much we depend on opinions other people.


While I was walking home, I thought, about how much we depend onrely on the opinions of other people.

While I was walking home, I thought, about how much we depend on the opinions's of other people.

While I was walking home, I thought, about how much we depend on opinions other people.

It’s not okay.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If we going to be free, self-sufficient and just happy - we have to understand, that we are free people right now.


If we going to be free, self-sufficient andor just happy - we have to understand, that we are free people right now.

If we going to be free, self-sufficient and just happy - we have to understand, that we are free people r. Right now.

If we want to doing sport – do it, if we want to smile, while we’re walking down the street – do it.


If we want to doing a sport – do it, if we want to smile, while we’re walking down the street – do it.

If we want to doing sports we can do it, i. If we want to smile, while we’re walking down the street – we can do it.

If weyou want to doingtake up sports – do it, if weyou want to smile, while we’en you're walking down the street – just do it.

Nobody else can’t make our life happy.


Nobody else can’t make our life happy.

OR: "can make us unhappy"

Nobody else can’t make our life happy.

Nobody else can’t make your life happy. and fulfilling.

Only you can manage it.


Only youwe can manage it.

Only you can manage it.That's on you.

But, I still think about people’s thoughts.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

ButThat said, I still think about people’s thoughts.

In one side, I don’t care about it, but in another side – I do.


IOn one side, I don’tthe one hand, I don't (want to) care about it, but ion anthe other side – I do.

IOn one sidehand, I don’t care about it, but ion anthe other side –hand I do.

InOn the one sidehand, I don’t care about it, but ion anthe other side – I do.

I really try to be absolutely selfish person.


I really try to be an absolutely selfish confident person.

I wouldn't use selfish here - it implies that someone is rude or inconsiderate because of their own self interest. It seems like you're talking more about self confidence, or you could also say "high self esteem" maybe :)

I really try to be absolutely selfish truly independent person.

Selfish has a very negative meaning. Try this instead.

I really try to be absolute totally selfish person.

But if I write it, I’m not.


But if I write it,about it, then I’m not.

But if I write it, I’mhad to say whether I am or not, I’m probably not.

I wish you independence and freedom to choose the path you want to live.


I wish you independence and freedom to choose the path you want to live.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I wish you the independence and freedom to choose the pathlife you want to live.

I’m sure, that all people deserve it.


I’m sure, that all people deserve it.

I’m sure, that all people deserve it.

I’m sure, that aAll people deserve it.that, I'm sure.

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