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CREA

Jan. 18, 2024

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Went to Australia 2

I'm going to talk about the continuation of my trip in Australia.

I went to farmer's market with my friends in the morning.

My friend's wife asked me Would you buy two small plants and 3kg of oranges.

Her friend Megan sells some plants and flowers at the market.

I enjoyed chatting with Megan.

Our conversation like this,

Me " Hi I'd like to buy two small trees for a hedge. Which tree should I buy?"

Megan" Hi Where do you plant? Are there Sunny place?"

Me" Sometimes Sunny sometimes not sunny. And She has bees on her vegie patch so I'd like to buy a tree which has flower blossom."

And then, she recommended the tree named "LEPTOSPERMUM Mesmer Eyes"

After that I bought 3kg of oranges.


オーストラリア旅行の続きです。
私は友達とマ―ケットに行きました。
友達の奥さんは、私に2本の木とオレンジ3kg買ってきてと言いました。

彼女の友達のメ―ガンさんはマーケットで木と花を売っています。

会話はこんな感じでした

私「小さい木を2本欲しいのですがどれを買えばよいですか?」
メ-ガン「その木はどこに植えますか?日が当たりますか?」
私「時々日が当たります、時々日が当たりません。 彼女の家にミツバチがいますから花が咲く木が良いです」

メ-ガンさんはLEPTOSPERMUM Mesmer Eyesをお勧めしてくれました。

*この花の名前はよくわかりませんでした。

Corrections

My friend's wife asked me , “Would you buy two small plants and 3kg kilos of oranges.?”

3kg is technically correct but 3 kilos sounds more natural

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CREA

Jan. 19, 2024

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I understand, thank you😊

Went to Australia 2

I went to a farmer's market with my friends in the morning.

My friend's wife asked me , "Would you buy two small plants and 3kg of oranges.?"

Her friend Megan sells some plants and flowers at the market.

I enjoyed chatting with Megan.

Our conversation went like this,


Me
, " Hi , I'd like to buy two small trees for a hedge.

Which tree should I buy?"

Megan, " Hi, Where do you plan to plant?

Are there Ssunny places?"

Me, " Sometimes Ssunny sometimes not sunny.

And Sshe (my wife?) has bees on her veggie patch so I'd like to buy a tree which has flower blossoms."

And then, she recommended the tree named "LEPTOSPERMUM Mesmer Eyes" ¶
."¶

After that
, I bought 3kg of oranges.

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CREA

Jan. 19, 2024

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Thank you😊

I went to a farmer's market with my friends in the morning.

My friend's wife asked me Would youto buy two small plants and 3kg of oranges.

Our conversation went like this,


Me " Hi I'd like to buy two small trees for a hedge.
"

you could also say, I told Megan I wanted to buy two small trees for a hedge

Which tree should I buy?"

Megan" Hi Where dowill you plant it/them?

Are there SIn a sunny place?"

Me" Sometimes Ssunny sometimes not sunny.

And Sshe has bees on her veggie patch so I'd like to buy a tree which has flower blossom."

she - your wife? if yes, you can say "my wife has bees..."

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Sounds like a nice morning! ☺️

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CREA

Jan. 19, 2024

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Thank you😊

I went to the farmer's market with my friends in the morning.

There are many farmers at the market so there is no punctuation here.

My friend's wife asked me "Would you buy two small plants and 3kg of oranges?".

...that's a lot of oranges!

Our conversation went like this, ¶

Me "


"
Hi , I'd like to buy two small trees for a hedge.

You don't usually have to put who is saying what if you can work it out from the context. Earlier you said you were asked to buy something so we can assume those is you talking to a seller.

Which trees should I buy?"

Megan" Hi "Where dowill you plant them?

Again, we can assume this is the reply.

Are tSomewhere Ssunny place?"

Me" "Sometimes Ssunny, sometimes not sunny.

And SheShe also has bees on her veggie patch so I'd like to buy a tree which has flower blossoms."

And then, she recommended the tree named "LEPTOSPERMUM Mesmer Eyes"


After that I
also bought 3kg of oranges.

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Honestly this was very close, good job. I hope you are making something nice with those oranges too!

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CREA

Jan. 18, 2024

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Thank you so much!

Went to Australia 2


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm going to talk about the continuation of my trip in Australia.


I went to farmer's market with my friends in the morning.


I went to the farmer's market with my friends in the morning.

There are many farmers at the market so there is no punctuation here.

I went to a farmer's market with my friends in the morning.

I went to a farmer's market with my friends in the morning.

My friend's wife asked me Would you buy two small plants and 3kg of oranges.


My friend's wife asked me "Would you buy two small plants and 3kg of oranges?".

...that's a lot of oranges!

My friend's wife asked me Would youto buy two small plants and 3kg of oranges.

My friend's wife asked me , "Would you buy two small plants and 3kg of oranges.?"

My friend's wife asked me , “Would you buy two small plants and 3kg kilos of oranges.?”

3kg is technically correct but 3 kilos sounds more natural

Her friend Megan sells some plants and flowers at the market.


Her friend Megan sells some plants and flowers at the market.

I enjoyed chatting with Megan.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Our conversation like this, Me " Hi I'd like to buy two small trees for a hedge.


Our conversation went like this, ¶

Me "


"
Hi , I'd like to buy two small trees for a hedge.

You don't usually have to put who is saying what if you can work it out from the context. Earlier you said you were asked to buy something so we can assume those is you talking to a seller.

Our conversation went like this,


Me " Hi I'd like to buy two small trees for a hedge.
"

you could also say, I told Megan I wanted to buy two small trees for a hedge

Our conversation went like this,


Me
, " Hi , I'd like to buy two small trees for a hedge.

Which tree should I buy?"


Which trees should I buy?"

Which tree should I buy?"

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Megan" Hi Where do you plant?


Megan" Hi "Where dowill you plant them?

Again, we can assume this is the reply.

Megan" Hi Where dowill you plant it/them?

Megan, " Hi, Where do you plan to plant?

Are there Sunny place?"


Are tSomewhere Ssunny place?"

Are there SIn a sunny place?"

Are there Ssunny places?"

Me" Sometimes Sunny sometimes not sunny.


Me" "Sometimes Ssunny, sometimes not sunny.

Me" Sometimes Ssunny sometimes not sunny.

Me, " Sometimes Ssunny sometimes not sunny.

And She has bees on her vegie patch so I'd like to buy a tree which has flower blossom."


And SheShe also has bees on her veggie patch so I'd like to buy a tree which has flower blossoms."

And Sshe has bees on her veggie patch so I'd like to buy a tree which has flower blossom."

she - your wife? if yes, you can say "my wife has bees..."

And Sshe (my wife?) has bees on her veggie patch so I'd like to buy a tree which has flower blossoms."

And then, she recommended the tree named "LEPTOSPERMUM Mesmer Eyes" After that I bought 3kg of oranges.


And then, she recommended the tree named "LEPTOSPERMUM Mesmer Eyes"


After that I
also bought 3kg of oranges.

And then, she recommended the tree named "LEPTOSPERMUM Mesmer Eyes" ¶
."¶

After that
, I bought 3kg of oranges.

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