Jan. 3, 2024
Went to Australia
I went to Australia last month. So I'm going to make a journal this trip in Australia.
This was my 8th times to visit Australia and 6th time to visit Sydney.
I'm so excited when I landed at the airport.
It takes ten hours to get to Sydney from Tokyo.
私は先月、オーストラリアに旅行に行きました。
だから、そのことをジャーナルに書きます。
今回のオーストラリアは８度目になります。そしてシドニーは６回度目です。飛行機が飛び立つときとてもワクワクしました。
東京からシドニーまで１０時間かかります。
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I went to Australia last month.
So I'm going to make kept a journal thisduring my trip in Australia.
So I kept a journal during my trip in Australia.
A more natural way to say this might be "I went to Australia last month, and kept a travel journal during my time there"
This was my 8th times to visiting Australia and my 6th time to visitin Sydney.
This was my 8th time visiting Australia and my 6th time in Sydney.
I'm was so excited when I landed at the airport.
I was so excited when I landed at the airport.
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Good job! You just need to make sure the tenses match :)
Jan. 4, 2024
Thank you for corrections.😃
WI went to Australia
I went to Australia
You could also title this "Traveling in Australia" since it sounds like you go there often.
So I'm going to make a journal about this trip in Australia. So I'm going to make a journal about this trip in Australia.
I would consider combining the first and second sentences so it doesn't sound as choppy. E.g., "I visited Australia last month, so I'm going to begin making a journal about my trip."
This was my 8th times to visiting Australia and 6th time to visiting Sydney.
This was my 8th time visiting Australia and 6th time visiting Sydney.
I'm waso excited when I landed at the airport.
I'm was excited when I landed at the airport.
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I would consider combining some of the sentences and re-ordering to make it flow better. E.g., "I travelled to Australia last month in what was my 8th time visiting the country and 6th time in the beautiful city of Sydney. Given how frequently I travel there, I've decided to begin keeping a journal to talk about my experiences. When I landed in [Sydney or whichever airport you flew into] I was so excited; after all, it takes ten hours to get to Sydney from Tokyo."
Jan. 4, 2024
Thank you for corrections and messages.
So I'm going to makwrite a journal about this trip in Australia.
So I'm going to write a journal about this trip in Australia.
This was my 8th times to visiting Australia and 6th time to visiting Sydney.
This was my 8th time visiting Australia and 6th time visiting Sydney.
I'm was so excited when I landed at the airport.
I was so excited when I landed at the airport.
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Melbourne 👍>>>Sydney 👎 haha😂
冗談
よく書きました
Jan. 4, 2024
添削ありがとうございます😊
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Went to Australia
You could also title this "Traveling in Australia" since it sounds like you go there often. |
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I went to Australia last month. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So I'm going to make a journal this trip in Australia.
So I'm going to So I'm going to make a journal about this trip in Australia. So I'm going to make a journal about this trip in Australia. I would consider combining the first and second sentences so it doesn't sound as choppy. E.g., "I visited Australia last month, so I'm going to begin making a journal about my trip."
So I A more natural way to say this might be "I went to Australia last month, and kept a travel journal during my time there" |
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This was my 8th times to visit Australia and 6th time to visit Sydney.
This was my 8th time
This was my 8th time
This was my 8th time |
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I'm so excited when I landed at the airport.
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It takes ten hours to get to Sydney from Tokyo. |
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