Aug. 15, 2025
Welcome to Rhea's Head
Hi Everyone! My name is Val and I'm a english learner. Nowadays, I'm studying english at the university and I'm excited with the idea of become in a great english speaker. I really love languages and that's why I decided to studied them. I always thought that languages connect people and I want to be part of that. So, I give you the welcome of my head, along these writings you are going to know how my head works. I hope you like what you discover and feel free to correct me, my journey is just starting and I have a lot to learn yet.
Keeping that in mind, I will share with you tree things that I'm mad at them
1. Books
2. Chess
3. Music
In the future writings I will develop those great and fascinating stuffs :)
I'll read all of your constructive opinions, see you soon!
Btw: Someone know how can I add a image to this writing, if you know, please tell me
¡Hola a todos! Me llamo Val y estoy aprendiendo inglés. Actualmente estudio inglés en la universidad y estoy muy ilusionada con la idea de llegar a hablarlo perfectamente. Me encantan los idiomas y por eso decidí estudiarlos. Siempre he pensado que los idiomas conectan a las personas y quiero formar parte de eso. Así que les doy la bienvenida a mi mente, a través de estos escritos van a conocer cómo funciona mi cabeza. Espero que les guste lo que descubran y no duden en corregirme, mi viaje acaba de empezar y aún me queda mucho por aprender.
Teniendo esto en cuenta, compartiré con ustedes tres cosas de las que estoy obsesionada:
1. Libros.
2. Ajedrez.
3. Música.
En futuros escritos desarrollaré estas cosas tan interesantes y fascinantes :)
Leeré todas sus opiniones constructivas, ¡nos vemos pronto!
Por cierto: ¿Alguien sabe cómo puedo añadir una imagen a este texto? Si lo sabes, por favor, dímelo.
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I really love languages and that's why I decided to studiedy them.
I always thought that languages connect people and I want to be part of that.
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I hope you like what you discover and feel free to correct me,; my journey is just starting and I have a lot to learn yet.
Keeping that in mind, I will share with you three things that I'm mad at them
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"Welcome of my head" does not really make sense and it's hard to tell what you mean so I corrected it to what I THINK you meant.
"Writings" doesn't really flow with the rest of the sentence, but I wouldn't say that it's completely wrong. I changed it to "entries" because it flows better and I think it communicates that you want to share your personal thoughts better compared to "writings". "Entries" implies a diary.
I hope you like what you discover and feel free to correct me, my journey is just starting and I have a lot to learn yet.
Keeping that in mind, I will share with you three things that I'm mad at them
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Music
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In the future writingentries I will develop thoese great and fascinating stuffideas :)
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I'll read all of your constructive opinions, see you soon!
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Btw: SomeDoes anyone know how can Ito add an image to this writing, ipost? If you know, please tell me.
Instead of "writing" I used "post" instead of "entries" since you're switching your focus from personal (your thoughts/diary) to impersonal (the entire platform). Hopefully that makes sense.
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Overall pretty good! You need to improve on word choices and tenses but you're still able to articulate your thoughts well
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So, I give you the welcome of my head, along these writings you are going to know how my head works. So, I "Welcome of my head" does not really make sense and it's hard to tell what you mean so I corrected it to what I THINK you meant. "Writings" doesn't really flow with the rest of the sentence, but I wouldn't say that it's completely wrong. I changed it to "entries" because it flows better and I think it communicates that you want to share your personal thoughts better compared to "writings". "Entries" implies a diary. So, I give you the welcome of my |
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Music In the future writings I will develop those great and fascinating stuffs :) I'll read all of your constructive opinions, see you soon! Music "Stuffs" could be changed to "things", but "ideas" flows better Music |
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Btw: Someone know how can I add a image to this writing, if you know, please tell me Btw: Instead of "writing" I used "post" instead of "entries" since you're switching your focus from personal (your thoughts/diary) to impersonal (the entire platform). Hopefully that makes sense. Btw |
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