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Welcome to Hangzhou!

Hangzhou is a famous city in China, Which is benefit from her beautiful views of nature and the profound cultural history.
When talking about the nature, the most famous lake among China named west lake is located in Hangzhou.
At spring, you can see green mountains inflect on the lake surface;At summer, the lotus sining in the sun with slight wind will make you feel unreally happiness;At autumn all the trees surrounded by the lake will richly dyed; and at winter,Snow will hidden the bridge and made her feel like a large boll.
As her history,There used to be a small kingdom 3 thousand years ago ,and now, it was named “liangzhu culture”.
At last,there are hundreds and thousands poems about hangzhou,the most famous author is SuShi, who was one of the most popular poem writers in Chinese history

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Welcome to Hangzhou!

Hangzhou is a famous city in China, Wwhich is benefits from herits beautiful views of nature and theits profound cultural history.

When talking about theits nature, the most famous lake amongin China named w, West lLake, is located in Hangzhou.

"The" is also okay, but "its" sounds more natural.

AtIn spring, you can see green mountains inreflected on the lake surface;At. In summer, the lotus sintting in the sun win the slighoft wind will make you feel unreally happiness;At. In autumn, all the trees surrounded bying the the lake willare richly dycolored;, and atin winter,S snow will hiddene the bridge and made her feellook like a large bollridge.

As herIn its history,T there used to be a small kingdom 3three thousand years ago ,and n. Now, it wais named “liangzhu culture.

At last,Finally, there are hundreds and thousands poems about hHangzhou, the most famous author isbeing SuShi, who wais one of the most popular poem writers in Chinese history.

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Welcome to Hangzhou!

Hangzhou is a famous city in China, Wwhich is benefits from herits beautiful views of nature and the profound cultural history.

When talking about theSpeaking of nature, the most famous lake amongin China named wWest lLake is located in Hangzhou.

AtIn the spring, you can see green mountains inreflect on the lake's surface;At. In the summer, the lotus sinflowers sitting in the sun with slight winda breeze will make you feel unreally happiness;Aty. In the autumn all the trees surrounded bying the lake willare richly dyed; and atcolored. And during the winter,S snow will hiddene the bridge and made her feellook like a large bolllump.

As herIn its history,T there used to be a small kingdom 3 thousand years ago , and now, it was namedcalled the “liangzhu culture.

At last,Finally, there are hundreds and thousands poems about hHangzhou, the most famous author of which is SuShi, who was one of the most popular poem writerts in Chinese history.

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Sounds like a nice place!

Welcome to Hangzhou!


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Hangzhou is a famous city in China, Which is benefit from her beautiful views of nature and the profound cultural history.


Hangzhou is a famous city in China, Wwhich is benefits from herits beautiful views of nature and the profound cultural history.

Hangzhou is a famous city in China, Wwhich is benefits from herits beautiful views of nature and theits profound cultural history.

When talking about the nature, the most famous lake among China named west lake is located in Hangzhou.


When talking about theSpeaking of nature, the most famous lake amongin China named wWest lLake is located in Hangzhou.

When talking about theits nature, the most famous lake amongin China named w, West lLake, is located in Hangzhou.

"The" is also okay, but "its" sounds more natural.

At spring, you can see green mountains inflect on the lake surface;At summer, the lotus sining in the sun with slight wind will make you feel unreally happiness;At autumn all the trees surrounded by the lake will richly dyed; and at winter,Snow will hidden the bridge and made her feel like a large boll.


AtIn the spring, you can see green mountains inreflect on the lake's surface;At. In the summer, the lotus sinflowers sitting in the sun with slight winda breeze will make you feel unreally happiness;Aty. In the autumn all the trees surrounded bying the lake willare richly dyed; and atcolored. And during the winter,S snow will hiddene the bridge and made her feellook like a large bolllump.

AtIn spring, you can see green mountains inreflected on the lake surface;At. In summer, the lotus sintting in the sun win the slighoft wind will make you feel unreally happiness;At. In autumn, all the trees surrounded bying the the lake willare richly dycolored;, and atin winter,S snow will hiddene the bridge and made her feellook like a large bollridge.

As her history,There used to be a small kingdom 3 thousand years ago ,and now, it was named “liangzhu culture”.


As herIn its history,T there used to be a small kingdom 3 thousand years ago , and now, it was namedcalled the “liangzhu culture.

As herIn its history,T there used to be a small kingdom 3three thousand years ago ,and n. Now, it wais named “liangzhu culture.

At last,there are hundreds and thousands poems about hangzhou,the most famous author is SuShi, who was one of the most popular poem writers in Chinese history


At last,Finally, there are hundreds and thousands poems about hHangzhou, the most famous author of which is SuShi, who was one of the most popular poem writerts in Chinese history.

At last,Finally, there are hundreds and thousands poems about hHangzhou, the most famous author isbeing SuShi, who wais one of the most popular poem writers in Chinese history.

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