July 27, 2021
weight lifting
I watched the live broadcast online of an Olympic weight lifting yesterday because it was not broadcasted. Kanae Yagi participated in the women's 55 kg class. Every time, when she lifts the barbell, she always makes a big smile. I tweeted about her, many people liked it, and some people retweeted it. Here is my tweet: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1419542009056882688
昨日、オリンピックのウェイトリフティングのテレビ中継がなかったので、ネットのライブ中継で観ました。八木かなえが女子55Kg級に出場しました。毎回、彼女はバーベルを挙げると、満面の笑みを見せてくれます。ツイッターに彼女について投稿したら、多くの人がいいねを押してくれて、何人かはリツイートしてくれました。
こちらがツイッターの投稿です。https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1419542009056882688
Every time, when she lifts the barbell, she always makes a big smilegrins.
The previous corrector already gave you a good correction, this is just another option. :)
July 28, 2021
Thank you!
weight lifting
weightlifting is one word.
I watched the live broadcast online of an Olympic weight lifting online yesterday because it was not broadcasted on the TV.
Kanae Yagi participated in the women's 55 kg class.
Every time, when she liftsed the barbell, she always makesde a big smile.
When you say every time, you don't need "when" anymore.
The past tense should be used here because you are talking about the event that happened yesterday.
I tweeted about her, many people liked it, and some people retweeted it.
Here is my tweet: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1419542009056882688
July 27, 2021
Thank you!
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weight lifting weight weightlifting is one word. |
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I watched the live broadcast online of an Olympic weight lifting yesterday because it was not broadcasted. I watched the live broadcast |
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Kanae Yagi participated in the women's 55 kg class. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Every time, when she lifts the barbell, she always makes a big smile. Every time When you say every time, you don't need "when" anymore. The past tense should be used here because you are talking about the event that happened yesterday. Every time The previous corrector already gave you a good correction, this is just another option. :) |
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I tweeted about her, many people liked it, and some people retweeted it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Here is my tweet: https://twitter.com/t_namba/status/1419542009056882688 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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