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Amaan

June 28, 2025

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Weekend morning

hey, Good morning , today i wake up at 7:50 am . It's a little late from my daily schedule. Yesterday night I was sleeping at my grandparent's house. Whenever I slept in that house, I wake up late only. I then came to my house and bathed. Then I started with my study routine. I studied till 1 pm . ( i wrote this u check my current level here from this)

Corrections

hHey,! Good morning , t. Today iI waoke up at 7:50 am .

wake should be pastense since it happened in the past.
*capitalisation

It's a little late fromcompared to my daily schedule.

"compared to" makes more sense.
Instead of daily, you can also say "regular," which makes it more clear that today is out of the ordinary.

YesterdayLast night I was sleepingt at my grandparent's' house.

Yesterday night is correct, but most of the time we say "last night."
"was sleeping" is technically okay, but "slept" makes more sense, because your activity is one that started and ended. It's a complete action.

When we are talking about belongings of a plural noun, which usually ends with s, put the apostrophe after. For example: My teachers' books. My friends' names. My siblings' clothes.

Whenever I sleept in that house, I always wake up late only.

The second half of your sentence is present, so the first half should be too.

Both past, which is also okay, would be:
whenever I slept in that house, I always woke up late.

I then camereturned to my house and bathed.

Came is kind of a weird word. Came meanst come to you. You can't really come to your own home. You can say somebody else came. you can only "come" to other people's places. ie) I came to my friend's house. I came to school.

BUT: I went home. I returned home.

so, returned, or went works here.

Feedback

Pretty good! Your errors seem to be wording errors, and some tense inconsistencies--that's always easy to forget. I would say that most of your sentences are very simple. Try to combine some and use some conjunctions!

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Amaan

June 30, 2025

1

Thank you for your valuable feedback. Can you suggest me effective and practical ways to improve my language, I mean I want to improve writing, speaking, reading and listening.

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B0BB0Y

June 30, 2025

1

For me, the main thing you have to do is write. First you learn grammar structures, and the rules of the languge, then you learn some vocab. For vocab, there's no special trick, you just have to stick it through with flash cards. Then, with your grammar and your vocab, try to write (and make sure you choose a range of topics). While you're writing, you will encounter problems with how to phrase things. Next you have to read. And then when you read, you will realise the solutions the problems you found in your own writing, and next time you try to incorporate it.

The other thing is to talk to yourself. That's how I improve my speaking. And lastly, consume content in the language you're learning. Watch videos, listen to podcasts, read children's books, etc.

I am not someone who has fully learned a language myself yet, so these are just my words of wisdom as someone who is also still on a jouney. Try and see what works for you. The most important thing is that whatever you do, you use the language regularly. That's why we are all here on this site.

hHey, Ggood morning , today iI waoke up at 7:50 am .

It's a little later from my normal daily schedule.

YesterdayLast night, I was sleeping at my grandparent's house.

"Yesterday night" is correct but "last night" sounds more natural and is how a native would say it

Whenever I sleept in that house, I always wake up late only.

I then came to mywent housme and had a bathed.

This is technically correct but, again, I rewrote it as a native would say it.

I studied till 1 pm .

( iI wrote this ufor you to check my current level here from this)

Feedback

Great job - loads of good stuff used here; well done!

Amaan's avatar
Amaan

June 30, 2025

1

Thank you for your valuable feedback. Can you suggest me effective and practical ways to improve my language, I mean I want to improve writing, speaking, reading and listening.

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JustMarmite

June 30, 2025

20

Talking to native speakers can be helpful as it gets you used to what the language sounds like and therefore your grammar will come more naturally. Listening and learning the lyrics to songs can be helpful; I website I use for this is called "lyrictraining". Writing on here is really great and do it preferably daily if you can and talk about a variety of subjects as it'll get you more comfortable in using the language. There's a great website called "Readlang" which I find helpful for reading - it's different texts at different levels (you can also upload your own) and a robot voice reads them to you and you can click on words to find their meanings and stuff, I find it to be very good. You can also improve your speaking by "shadowing" - what this means is to imitate native speakers and copy how they say things. Good luck with your language journey!

Weekend morning


I studied till 1 pm .


I studied till 1 pm .

( i wrote this u check my current level here from this)


( iI wrote this ufor you to check my current level here from this)

hey, Good morning , today i wake up at 7:50 am .


hHey, Ggood morning , today iI waoke up at 7:50 am .

hHey,! Good morning , t. Today iI waoke up at 7:50 am .

wake should be pastense since it happened in the past. *capitalisation

It's a little late from my daily schedule.


It's a little later from my normal daily schedule.

It's a little late fromcompared to my daily schedule.

"compared to" makes more sense. Instead of daily, you can also say "regular," which makes it more clear that today is out of the ordinary.

Yesterday night I was sleeping at my grandparent's house.


YesterdayLast night, I was sleeping at my grandparent's house.

"Yesterday night" is correct but "last night" sounds more natural and is how a native would say it

YesterdayLast night I was sleepingt at my grandparent's' house.

Yesterday night is correct, but most of the time we say "last night." "was sleeping" is technically okay, but "slept" makes more sense, because your activity is one that started and ended. It's a complete action. When we are talking about belongings of a plural noun, which usually ends with s, put the apostrophe after. For example: My teachers' books. My friends' names. My siblings' clothes.

Whenever I slept in that house, I wake up late only.


Whenever I sleept in that house, I always wake up late only.

Whenever I sleept in that house, I always wake up late only.

The second half of your sentence is present, so the first half should be too. Both past, which is also okay, would be: whenever I slept in that house, I always woke up late.

I then came to my house and bathed.


I then came to mywent housme and had a bathed.

This is technically correct but, again, I rewrote it as a native would say it.

I then camereturned to my house and bathed.

Came is kind of a weird word. Came meanst come to you. You can't really come to your own home. You can say somebody else came. you can only "come" to other people's places. ie) I came to my friend's house. I came to school. BUT: I went home. I returned home. so, returned, or went works here.

Then I started with my study routine.


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