June 13, 2023
Weekend -.-
After 6 schooling days, I usually relax at the weekend - mainly on Sunday. In the morning, I often wake up a bit later than other days because I'm tired of waking up early to prepare to school :(. After breakfast, I do the housework to help my parents. If I had time to do my homework in class a few days ago, I would have had my free time to watch films, play games, listen to music or maybe sleep a little bit more :).Sometimes, my friends invite me to go to their party, or we just ride around together. Unless we are all busy, we will spend some time catching a bus to the city and buying some clothes, eating some food and watching films in the cinemas. But last Sunday, I spend all the time in my home due to the bad weather. The storm approached suddenly so I couldn't go anywhere. However, it was the coolest day of this summer so I didn't hate it, although it prevented me from swimming.
The Weekend -.-
After 6 schooling days, I usually relax at the weekend - mainly on Sunday.
"at the weekend" is fine (I am a UK English speaker)
In the morning, I often wake up a bit later than other days because I'm tired ofrom waking up early to prepare toget ready for school :(.
Minor corrections---
"tired of" is more like fed up/unhappy with; "tired from" = tired because of X
"get ready for school", "get ready for work", "get ready to go out", etc., sounds more natural; prepare is more like for a big event or to make something (prepare for a marathon, prepare for a big test, prepare a meal)
After breakfast, I do the housework to help my parents.
No need for "the"
If I had time to do my homework in class a few days ago, I would have had my free time to watch films, play games, listen to music or maybe sleep a little bit more :). Sometimes, my friends invite me to go to their party,ies or we just ride around together.
Unless we are all busy, we will spend some time catching a bus to the city and buying some clothes, eating some food and watching films in the cinemas.
But last Sunday, I spendt all themy time in myat home due to the bad weather.
TheA storm approached suddenly, so I couldn't go anywhere.
However, it was the coolest day of this summer so I didn't hate it, although it did prevented me from swimming.
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You write great! I just made some minor improvements :) feel free to ask any questions!
June 15, 2023
Thanks for correcting my paragraph! I'll look for it.
After 6 schooling days, I usually relax aton the weekend - mainly on Sunday.
"school" can be used as an adjective when referring to things related to school (school days, school clothes, etc).
Use the preposition "on" when referring to days of the week or the weekend.
In the morning, I often wake up a bit later than other days because I'm tired of waking up early to prepare to school :(.
After breakfast, I do the housework to help my parents.
If I had time to do my homework in class a few days ago, I would have had my free time to watch films, play games, listen to music or maybe sleep a little bit more :). Sometimes, my friends invite me to go to their party, or we just ride around together.
You can either say "had free time" or "had my time free"
Unless we are all busy, we will spend some time catching a bus to the city and buying some clothes, eating some food and watching films in the cinemas.
But last Sunday, I spendt all the timeday in my home due to the bad weather.
Since you are talking about the past, you need to use the past tense of spend.
Use "all day" rather than "all time" when you're talking about a specific day.
The storm approached suddenly so I couldn't go anywhere.
However, it was the coolest day of this summer so I didn't hate it, although it prevented me from swimming.
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Nice job! You made some mistakes, but it was very easy to understand.
June 15, 2023
Thank you so much for your correction and encouragement!
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After 6 schooling days, I usually relax at the weekend - mainly on Sunday. After 6 school "school" can be used as an adjective when referring to things related to school (school days, school clothes, etc). Use the preposition "on" when referring to days of the week or the weekend. After 6 school "at the weekend" is fine (I am a UK English speaker) |
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In the morning, I often wake up a bit later than other days because I'm tired of waking up early to prepare to school :(. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In the morning, I often wake up a bit later than other days because I'm tired Minor corrections--- "tired of" is more like fed up/unhappy with; "tired from" = tired because of X "get ready for school", "get ready for work", "get ready to go out", etc., sounds more natural; prepare is more like for a big event or to make something (prepare for a marathon, prepare for a big test, prepare a meal) |
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After breakfast, I do the housework to help my parents. This sentence has been marked as perfect! After breakfast, I do No need for "the" |
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If I had time to do my homework in class a few days ago, I would have had my free time to watch films, play games, listen to music or maybe sleep a little bit more :).Sometimes, my friends invite me to go to their party, or we just ride around together. If I had time to do my homework in class a few days ago, I would have had You can either say "had free time" or "had my time free" If I had time to do my homework in class a few days ago, I would have had |
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Unless we are all busy, we will spend some time catching a bus to the city and buying some clothes, eating some food and watching films in the cinemas . |
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But last Sunday, I spend all the time in my home due to the bad weather. But last Sunday, I spen Since you are talking about the past, you need to use the past tense of spend. Use "all day" rather than "all time" when you're talking about a specific day. But last Sunday, I spen |
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The storm approached suddenly so I couldn't go anywhere. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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However, it was the coolest day of this summer so I didn't hate it, although it prevented me from swimming. This sentence has been marked as perfect! However, it was the coolest day of this summer so I didn't hate it, although it did prevent |
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Unless we are all busy, we will spend some time catching a bus to the city and buying some clothes, eating some food and watching films in the cinemas. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Unless we are all busy, we will spend |
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