Sept. 6, 2020
weekend
The weekend can be a very stressful time because it marks the end of the week and the beginning of a new one. Work, studies all the responsibilities again can be a lot of pressure.
weekend
The weekend can be a very stressful time because it marks the end of the week and the beginning of a new one.
Your sentence is fine, but a more natural phrasing would be:
"it marks the end of one week and the beginning of a new one"
Work, studies, and dealing with all of the responsibilities again can be a lot of pressure.
The original sentence felt "off" to me. I think it's because "work" and "studies" are action-oriented words, and "responsibilities" are a "thing." I think this phrasing is more natural.
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Good job! I feel the same way sometimes. Keep on writing!
Sept. 8, 2020
Thank you so much! :)
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The weekend can be a very stressful time because it marks the end of the week and the beginning of a new one. The weekend can be a very stressful time because it marks the end of the week and the beginning of a new one. Your sentence is fine, but a more natural phrasing would be: "it marks the end of one week and the beginning of a new one" |
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Work, studies all the responsibilities again can be a lot of pressure. Work, studies, and dealing with all of the responsibilities again can be a lot of pressure. The original sentence felt "off" to me. I think it's because "work" and "studies" are action-oriented words, and "responsibilities" are a "thing." I think this phrasing is more natural. |
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