Feb. 9, 2025
Week end in Brighton
This week end, was my firt week end at Brighton, since my move with my host family. We are arrived for 1 weeks. With a new house, new school and new neighboors. On saturday, i had start my day at eight am, with breakfasts and i went at my first pilates Lesson. We are i think 10 people, the lesson was great and the teacher was very nice. The lesson dured one hours. Then thaht i takes a bus for join a new friend, three aupair, the first aupair was french like me, the second is germain and the last Australian, thaht more easy for she to speak english of course. We spock and ate at the Brunch restaurant, the restaurant was very nice and i ate a Berry pancakes. After the Brunch we going to little bit shopping and we are going in the Pub for saw the match of six nation, England again France. That was a cool match and very close during all match. The atmosphere in the pub are very friendly but i was for the france of course, so unfortunately we have lost... And my saturday finish like this. The sunday is little bit rainy, so i walked until the sea and i walked six kilometers.
This week end, was my first week end at Brighton, since my move with my host family.
Weekend is one word. First was just a simple typo. 'since my move with my host family' this is correct if you and your host family all moved together to Brighton, but if it was just you going to your host family, it's more natural to say 'since moving in with my host family.'
On sSaturday, iI had started my day at eight am, with breakfasts and iI went ato my first pPilates Llesson.
A couple of capital letters needed changing. You can also write 8 am
We are iI think, 10 people, the lesson was great and the teacher was very nice.
The lesson dured one hoursation was one hour. Or The lesson lasted for an hour.
Your sentence is ok but sounds a little formal.
We spocke and ate at the Bbrunch restaurant, the restaurant was very nice and iI ate a Bberry pancakes.
Just some spelling and capital letter changes
After the Bbrunch we going to do a little bit of shopping and we are going into the Ppub for sawto watch the match of six nations, England against France.
That was a cool match and it was very close during allthe whole match.
The atmosphere in the pub arewas very friendly but iI was for the fsupporting France of course, sobut unfortunately we have lost...
And that's how my sSaturday finish like thised.
The sSunday is little bit rainy, so iI walked untilby the sea and iI walked six kilometeres.
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This is good, most of the corrections are just spelling mistakes and some capital letter changes. I could understand everything that you were trying to say.
Week end in Brighton
This week end, was my first week end atin Brighton, since my move with my host family.
We are arrived for 1 weeks ago.
With a new house, new school and new neighboours.
On sSaturday, i had started my day at eight am, with breakfasts and then i went ato my first pilates Llesson.
WThere are i think 10 people there I think, the lesson was great and the teacher was very nice.
The lesson durlasted one hours.
Then after thaht, i takesook a bus forto join a new friends, three aupairs, the first aupair was fFrench like me, the second is gGermain and the last Australian, thahtit's more easy for sher to speak english of course.
I'm a little bit confused on the last bit but I think this is what you meant.
We spocke and ate at the Brunch restaurant, the restaurant was very nice and iI ate a Bberry pancakes.
After the Brunch we going towent to do a little bit of shopping and we are goingwent in the Pub forand saw the match of six nation, England against France.
ThaIt was a cool match and very close during all the match.
The atmosphere in the pub arewas very friendly but i was for the fFrance of course, so unfortunately we have lost...
And my saturday finished like thisat.
The sSunday iwass little bit rainy, so i walked untilalong the sea and i walked six kilometers.
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Well done! Just some typos and grammar errors, I hope you're enjoying the UK!
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This week end, was my firt week end at Brighton, since my move with my host family. This week This week Weekend is one word. First was just a simple typo. 'since my move with my host family' this is correct if you and your host family all moved together to Brighton, but if it was just you going to your host family, it's more natural to say 'since moving in with my host family.' |
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We are arrived for 1 weeks. We are arrived |
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With a new house, new school and new neighboors. With a new house, new school and new neighbo |
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On saturday, i had start my day at eight am, with breakfasts and i went at my first pilates Lesson. On On A couple of capital letters needed changing. You can also write 8 am |
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We are i think 10 people, the lesson was great and the teacher was very nice.
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The lesson dured one hours. The lesson The lesson dur Your sentence is ok but sounds a little formal. |
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Then thaht i takes a bus for join a new friend, three aupair, the first aupair was french like me, the second is germain and the last Australian, thaht more easy for she to speak english of course. Then after tha I'm a little bit confused on the last bit but I think this is what you meant. |
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We spock and ate at the Brunch restaurant, the restaurant was very nice and i ate a Berry pancakes. We spo We spo Just some spelling and capital letter changes |
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After the Brunch we going to little bit shopping and we are going in the Pub for saw the match of six nation, England again France. After the Brunch we After the |
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That was a cool match and very close during all match.
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The atmosphere in the pub are very friendly but i was for the france of course, so unfortunately we have lost... The atmosphere in the pub The atmosphere in the pub |
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And my saturday finish like this. And my saturday finished like th And that's how my |
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The sunday is little bit rainy, so i walked until the sea and i walked six kilometers.
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