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Fernanhaiku

May 17, 2023

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Week 1

¡Hello everyone! How have you been these days? I'm fine. Thank you for all of your advice that you gave me in my last post about how I should study your feedback and corrections. Now I have a clearer idea about how to do so. I'm going to write my common mistakes in a notebook, if it's possible with an explanation, and from time to time I'm going to review them. I'm just going to read them and not going to memorize them because it's a little bit boring. I'm also trying to make my language learning something fun instead a chore as I already have a lot of chores in my life. I would like to start writing daily again, however, I have a lot of responsabilities in my house, I also have a job and I need to study for my entrance exam. I think, I only would be able to write a weekly post. However, I have the habit of writing daily entries in English in my diary, and this way I can improve my English and my mental health. I'll try to be more active in langcorrect and correc a lot of posts. Thanks for reading and for your corrections in advance. Right now I'm after a podcast in English, my favorite genres are mistery, horror, romance and documentary, if you have any suggestion it would be nice.

Corrections

Week 1

¡Hello, everyone!

We don't use the upside-down sentence terminators in English.

お久しぶりです!Welcome back!

How have you been these days?

I'm fine.

Thank you for all of your advice that you gave me in my last post about how I should study your feedback and corrections.

or,

Thank you for all of the advice that you gave me in my last post about how I should study your feedback and corrections.

Now I have a clearer idea about how to do so.

I'm going to write my common mistakes in a notebook and, if it's possible, with an explanation, and from time to time I'm going to review them.

I'm just going to read them and not going to memorize them because it's a little bit boring.

そうですね!

I'm also trying to make my language learning something fun instead of a chore as I already have a lot of chores in my life.

I would like to start writing daily again, however, I have a lot of responsaibilities in my house,at home. I also have a job and I need to study for my entrance exam.

忙しそうですね。

I think, I only would be able to write a weekly post.

However, I have thea habit of writing daily entries in English in my diary, however, and this way I can improve my English and my mental health.

I'll try to be more active in langcorrect and correct a lot of posts.

全然大丈夫です!

Thanks for reading and for your corrections in advance.

Right now I'm aftelooking for a podcast in English, m. My favorite genres are miystery, horror, romance and documentary, i. If you have any suggestion it, I would be niceappreciate it.

Feedback

Welcome back! Once a week sounds fine. I like Fresh Air, Hidden Brain, How I Built This with Guy Raz and StoryCorps. I think you'd really like some of these, too. Good work!

Week 1


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¡Hello everyone!


¡Hello, everyone!

We don't use the upside-down sentence terminators in English. お久しぶりです!Welcome back!

How have you been these days?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm fine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thank you for all of your advice that you gave me in my last post about how I should study your feedback and corrections.


Thank you for all of your advice that you gave me in my last post about how I should study your feedback and corrections.

or, Thank you for all of the advice that you gave me in my last post about how I should study your feedback and corrections.

Now I have a clearer idea about how to do so.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm going to write my common mistakes in a notebook, if it's possible with an explanation, and from time to time I'm going to review them.


I'm going to write my common mistakes in a notebook and, if it's possible, with an explanation, and from time to time I'm going to review them.

I'm just going to read them and not going to memorize them because it's a little bit boring.


I'm just going to read them and not going to memorize them because it's a little bit boring.

そうですね!

I'm also trying to make my language learning something fun instead a chore as I already have a lot of chores in my life.


I'm also trying to make my language learning something fun instead of a chore as I already have a lot of chores in my life.

I would like to start writing daily again, however, I have a lot of responsabilities in my house, I also have a job and I need to study for my entrance exam.


I would like to start writing daily again, however, I have a lot of responsaibilities in my house,at home. I also have a job and I need to study for my entrance exam.

忙しそうですね。

I think, I only would be able to write a weekly post.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, I have the habit of writing daily entries in english in my diary, and this way I can improve my english and my mental health.


I'll try to be more active in langcorrect and correc a lot of posts.


I'll try to be more active in langcorrect and correct a lot of posts.

全然大丈夫です!

Thanks for reading and for your corrections in advance.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Right now I'm after a podcast, my favorite genres are mistery, horror and documentary, if you have any suggestion it would be nice.


Right now I'm after a podcast, my favorite genres are mistery, horror, romance and documentary, if you have any suggestion it would be nice.


Right now I'm after a podcast in English, my favorite genres are mistery, horror, romance and documentary, if you have any suggestion it would be nice.


Right now I'm aftelooking for a podcast in English, m. My favorite genres are miystery, horror, romance and documentary, i. If you have any suggestion it, I would be niceappreciate it.

However, I have the habit of writing daily entries in English in my diary, and this way I can improve my English and my mental health.


However, I have thea habit of writing daily entries in English in my diary, however, and this way I can improve my English and my mental health.

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