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Jan. 26, 2024

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Chinese Nursery Rhyme

There’s a funny nursery rhyme singing like that:
There’s a vines tree in front of the door of my house. It just sprouts at the spring. A snail carrying his heavy shell is climbing up this tree step by step.
Over the tree there are two small yellow birds who just jeer at this snail, they said,“it’s too early for the vines to bear fruit, what are you climbing for?”
The snail answered: “do not laugh at me, when I arrive at the treetops, the fruit must have ripe.”
As it’s full of childlike fun, many singers have performed in different stages. The most popular performer in this song is Teng Ge E, who is a fork singer with very forceful and resonant voice, make this song more funnier because of the contrary. (In Chinese, we call it 反差萌)

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A snail carrying his heavy shell is climbing up this tree step by step.

(In Chinese, we call it 反差萌)

Chinese Nursery Rhyme


There’s a funny nursery rhyme singing like that: There’s a vines tree in front of the door of my house.


There’s a funny nursery rhyme singingthat goes like that: is: There’s a vines tree in front of the door of my house. There’s a funny nursery rhyme that goes like this: There’s a vine tree in front of the door of my house.

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It just sprouts at the spring.


It just sprouts at thein spring. It sprouts in spring.

A snail carrying his heavy shell is climbing up this tree step by step.


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Over the tree there are two small yellow birds who just jeer at this snail, they said,“it’s too early for the vines to bear fruit, what are you climbing for?” The snail answered: “do not laugh at me, when I arrive at the treetops, the fruit must have ripe.” As it’s full of childlike fun, many singers have performed in different stages.


Over the tree there are two small yellow birds who just jeer at this snail, they said,saying “it’s too early for the vines to bear fruit, what are you climbing for?” The snail answereds : “do not laugh at me, when I arrive at the treetops, the fruit mustwill have ripe.” ned." As it’s full of childlike fun, many singers have performed it in different stagavenues. Over the tree there are two small yellow birds who jeer at this snail, saying “it’s too early for the vines to bear fruit, what are you climbing for?” The snail answers : “do not laugh at me, when I arrive at the treetops, the fruit will have ripened." As it’s full of childlike fun, many singers have performed it in different avenues.

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The most popular performer in this song is Teng Ge E, who is a fork singer with very forceful and resonant voice, make this song more funnier because of the contrary.


The most popular performer in this song is Teng Ge E, who is a forlk singer with a very forcepowerful and resonant voice, which make this song more funnier because of the contraryst. The most popular performer in this song is Teng Ge E, who is a folk singer with a very powerful and resonant voice which make this song funnier because of the contrast.

I imagine you meant folk! Although a fork singer would be interesting! "more funnier" is a double adjective and incorrect, you can just say funnier. It's a mistake a lot of natives make so don't worry

Chinese n nursery rhyme


(In Chinese, we call it 反差萌)


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Chinese nursery rhyme


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