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Scarlett_Father

Jan. 24, 2025

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According to the the latest weather report, tomorrow's temperature will be as low as -30 degrees Celsius, and the wind chill will be -40 degrees Celsius., so I take out a heavy down feather clothes.

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According to the the latest weather report, tomorrow's temperature will be as low as -30 degrees Celsius, and the wind chill will be -40 degrees Celsius., so I take out a heavy down featherC°, so I will wear thick down clothesing.

C° - is usually used, easier to read.

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DemonRuthBIA2025

Jan. 27, 2025

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With down clothing- is usually described as "thick" rather than "heavy"

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Scarlett_Father

Jan. 27, 2025

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Thank you for being so helpful.

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According to the the latest weather report, tomorrow's temperature will be as low as -30 degrees Celsius, and the wind chill will be -40 degrees Celsius., so I take out a heavy down featherwill wear some heavy clothes.

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Scarlett_Father

Jan. 25, 2025

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Thank you for your correction.

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According to the the latest weather report, tomorrow's temperature will be as low as -30 degrees Celsius, and the wind chill will be -40 degrees Celsius., so I take out a heavy down feather Therefore, I will wear several layers of clothes.

I changed the sentences to be broken down in two sentences to make it easier to read. Also, I'm assuming that you want to wear several layers of clothing to be warm tomorrow.

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Hope you stay warm tomorrow.

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Scarlett_Father

Jan. 24, 2025

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Thank you!Genernally, when the weather is lower than -25 degree Celsius, I wear a mask.

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According to the the latest weather report, tomorrow's temperature will be as low as -30 degrees Celsius, and the wind chill will be -40 degrees Celsius., so I take out a heavy down feather clothes.


According to the the latest weather report, tomorrow's temperature will be as low as -30 degrees Celsius, and the wind chill will be -40 degrees Celsius., so I take out a heavy down feather Therefore, I will wear several layers of clothes.

I changed the sentences to be broken down in two sentences to make it easier to read. Also, I'm assuming that you want to wear several layers of clothing to be warm tomorrow.

According to the the latest weather report, tomorrow's temperature will be as low as -30 degrees Celsius, and the wind chill will be -40 degrees Celsius., so I take out a heavy down featherwill wear some heavy clothes.

According to the the latest weather report, tomorrow's temperature will be as low as -30 degrees Celsius, and the wind chill will be -40 degrees Celsius., so I take out a heavy down featherC°, so I will wear thick down clothesing.

C° - is usually used, easier to read.

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