Feb. 11, 2024
Weather
It's past four thirty in the afternoon. Today it's clear and my room, since it's facing the south, warmed up nicely. However, this year, this part of the country is also colder than usual, I think. But it's still mild compared to other parts of the country. I selected this city for me to live because of the mildness of the weather, so no wonder.
午後の４時半を過ぎました。今日はよく晴れて、南向きの私の部屋はぽかぽか暖かくなりました。けれども、今年はこの辺もいつもより寒いと思います。それでも他の場所に比べたら、穏やかですけどね。私がこの街を居住地に選んだのは、ここの気候のよさからなので、驚くことではないです。
Weather
It's past four thirty in the afternoon.
Today it's clears sunny and my room, since it's facing the south, warmed up nicely.
However, this year, this part of the country is also colder than usual, I think.
But it's still mild compared to other parts of the country.
I selected this city for me to livedecided to live in this city because of the mildness of the weather, so no wonder.
Your sentence is correct too but this is a bit more natural
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It's a little past four thirty in the afternoon.
Adding a qualifier like "a little past" or "just past" is more natural in this case. Simply saying it's "past" means it could be any time after 4:30, so it's not super clear. If it's not already 5:00, this sort of expression with "a little" or "just" works great.
Today, it's clear and my room, since it's facing the south, warmed up nicely.
However, this year, this part of the country is also colder than usual, I think.
But it's still mild compared to other parts of the country.
I selectedchose this city for me to live in because of the mildness of the weather, so no wonder.
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South facing windows are so nice for soaking in some afternoon sun.
My window right now also faces south, but it's in a corner and there's a wall to the west, so I only get sun until about ~2pm before the sun disappears over the wall. :'(
Feb. 11, 2024
Thank you! Ugh, that's a pity about the wall. I'm dozing in the middle of the day. XD
I selected this city for me to livechose to live in this city because of the mildness of the weather, so no wonder.
I don't think the usage of "no wonder" here makes sense. Here is a way you could rewrite the sentence so that "no wonder" makes sense.
"No wonder" can be used like "it's no wonder <outcome>, <reason>." So you could write "It's no wonder I chose to live here, I love mild weather."
You can also structure it like "<reason>, no wonder <outcome>." For example "I love mild weather, so it's no wonder I chose to live here."
If you put it on the end of a sentence, then the subject should come before it and the reason should be implied or obvious from context. I can't think of any easy examples, so here's a more complicated one. Say you are driving with your friends, and then suddenly the car has a flat tire. You pull over and get out. Someone says "why did we get a flat tire?" You look at the tire and you see a huge nail sticking out of it, and say "well, it's no wonder why." Everyone sees it and knows why.
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Good job.
Weather
It's past four thirty in the afternoon.
Today it'swas a clear day and my room, since it' is facing the south, warmed up nicely.
However, this year, this part of the country is also colder than usual, I think.
But it's still mild compared to other parts of the country.
I selected this city for me to liveThis is expected, since I chose to live in this city because of the mildness of theits weather, so no wonder.
I think this is more natural.
Feb. 11, 2024
I see. I like it better. Thank you!
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It's past four thirty in the afternoon.
Today it'the weather is clear, and my room, since it's facing the south, warmed up nicely.
However, this year, this part of the country is also colder than usual, I think.
But it's still mild compared to other parts of the country.
I selected this city for me to live in because of the mildness of the weather, so no wonder.
Feb. 11, 2024
Thank you!
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I think this is more natural. I I don't think the usage of "no wonder" here makes sense. Here is a way you could rewrite the sentence so that "no wonder" makes sense. "No wonder" can be used like "it's no wonder <outcome>, <reason>." So you could write "It's no wonder I chose to live here, I love mild weather." You can also structure it like "<reason>, no wonder <outcome>." For example "I love mild weather, so it's no wonder I chose to live here." If you put it on the end of a sentence, then the subject should come before it and the reason should be implied or obvious from context. I can't think of any easy examples, so here's a more complicated one. Say you are driving with your friends, and then suddenly the car has a flat tire. You pull over and get out. Someone says "why did we get a flat tire?" You look at the tire and you see a huge nail sticking out of it, and say "well, it's no wonder why." Everyone sees it and knows why. I I Your sentence is correct too but this is a bit more natural |
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