Oct. 23, 2022
Weather
Although the summer of my hometown has boiling hot weather and is extremely humid, which is not my type, it’s quite awesome during the end of summer & fall. Since my hometown is located near the salty lake, air quality going to worse each day.
I think I would say the beginning of spring. The weather is very pleasant and I am glad to see everything comes back to life and the beauty of spring blossom. Additionally, I can wear fashionable clothes that I don’t sweat a lot in them and the clothes can’t smell disgusting.
If I could choose, I would say about 24 degrees with clear skies and a cool breeze and sun. I think it’s getting romantic if the orange fallen leaf is overspread on the ground.
Hardly could you find out the weather type in my country. The weather in my country is pretty nice in some provinces and in other provinces is very unpredictable. However, it’s nice to have different weather types all over the country.
I’d love to participate in some outdoor activities like hiking and running or maybe meeting up with some friends. Therefore, on a sunny day, if I have some time to spare, I will do hiking in the local park or explore the surrounding neighborhood where I live now.
Weather
Although the summer of my hometown has boiling hot weather and is extremely humid, which is not my type, it’s quite awesome during the end of summer & fall.
Since my hometown is located near the salty lake, air quality going to worse each day.
Since my hometown is located near the salty lake, air quality has been worsening / declining (each day) --> I would leave "each day" out, since the verbs before already signify the passage of time. If you want to say it has been worsening fast, you could instead say "... has been rapidly / quickly worsening / declining."
I think I would say the beginning of spring.
The sentence itself is perfect. But it seems to be missing some information or context.
The weather is very pleasant and I am glad to see everything comes back to life and the beauty of spring blossom.
"... glad to see everything come back to life..." --> Everything is an indefinite pronoun. It does not have a plural. Therefore the verb following it would be "come", i.e. a singular verb
Additionally, I can wear fashionable clothes that I don’t sweat a lot in them and the clothes can’t smell disgusting.
Additionally, I can wear fashionable clothes I don’t / won't sweat a lot in, which means they won't smell / stink / have a bad odour.
If I could choose, I would say about 24 degrees with clear skies and a cool breeze and sun.
Again, context missing. Are you talking about your preferred weather conditions?
I think it’s getting romantic if the orange fallen leaf is overspread on the ground.
I find the orange leaves spread all over the roads on the streets romantic
Hardly could you find out the weather type in my country.
Hardly would you be able to guess the type of weather in my country
The weather in my country is pretty nice in some provinces and in other provinces is very unpredictable.
However, it’s nice to have different weather types all over the country.
... different types of weather conditions...
I’d love to participate in some outdoor activities like hiking and running or maybe meeting up with some friends.
Therefore, on a sunny day, if I have some time to spare, I will do hiking in the local park or explore the surrounding neighborhood where I live now.
... I will go hiking...
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Great effort! Good variety in vocabulary and sentence construction.
Oct. 23, 2022
Thanks for your corrections & tips.
Since my hometown is located near the salty lake, air quality going tois worse each day.
"air quality gets worse" "air quality is going to be worse" "air quality worsens" are all ok. Worse is a relative term meaning more bad. It implies change so going or similar is not needed
Additionally, I can wear fashionable clothes that I don’t sweat a lot in them and the clothes can’don't smell disgusting.
I think it’s getting romantic if the orange fallen leaf is overspreadfallen orange leaves are on the ground.
"spread over the ground" also works
Hardlyyou could youHardly find out the weather type in my country.
"find out" means discover which doesn't apply to weather. you find out a secret
Oct. 23, 2022
Thanks for your corrections & tips.
Oct. 23, 2022
Thanks for your corrections & advice.
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Although the summer of my hometown has boiling hot weather and is extremely humid, which is not my type, it’s quite awesome during the end of summer & fall. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since my hometown is located near the salty lake, air quality going to worse each day. Since my hometown is located near the salty lake, air quality "air quality gets worse" "air quality is going to be worse" "air quality worsens" are all ok. Worse is a relative term meaning more bad. It implies change so going or similar is not needed Since my hometown is located near the salty lake, air quality going to worse each day. Since my hometown is located near the salty lake, air quality has been worsening / declining (each day) --> I would leave "each day" out, since the verbs before already signify the passage of time. If you want to say it has been worsening fast, you could instead say "... has been rapidly / quickly worsening / declining." |
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I think I would say the beginning of spring. I think I would say the beginning of spring. The sentence itself is perfect. But it seems to be missing some information or context. |
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The weather is very pleasant and I am glad to see everything comes back to life and the beauty of spring blossom. The weather is very pleasant and I am glad to see everything comes back to life and the beauty of spring blossom. "... glad to see everything come back to life..." --> Everything is an indefinite pronoun. It does not have a plural. Therefore the verb following it would be "come", i.e. a singular verb |
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Additionally, I can wear fashionable clothes that I don’t sweat a lot in them and the clothes can’t smell disgusting. Additionally, I can wear fashionable clothes Additionally, I can wear fashionable clothes that I don’t sweat a lot in them and the clothes can’t smell disgusting. Additionally, I can wear fashionable clothes I don’t / won't sweat a lot in, which means they won't smell / stink / have a bad odour. |
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If I could choose, I would say about 24 degrees with clear skies and a cool breeze and sun. If I could choose, I would say about 24 degrees with clear skies and a cool breeze and sun. Again, context missing. Are you talking about your preferred weather conditions? |
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I think it’s getting romantic if the orange fallen leaf is overspread on the ground. I think it’s getting romantic if the "spread over the ground" also works I think it’s getting romantic if the orange fallen leaf is overspread on the ground. I find the orange leaves spread all over the roads on the streets romantic |
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Hardly could you find out the weather type in my country.
"find out" means discover which doesn't apply to weather. you find out a secret Hardly could you find out the weather type in my country. Hardly would you be able to guess the type of weather in my country |
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The weather in my country is pretty nice in some provinces and in other provinces is very unpredictable. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, it’s nice to have different weather types all over the country. However, it’s nice to have different weather types all over the country. ... different types of weather conditions... |
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I’d love to participate in some outdoor activities like hiking and running or maybe meeting up with some friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Therefore, on a sunny day, if I have some time to spare, I will do hiking in the local park or explore the surrounding neighborhood where I live now. Therefore, on a sunny day, if I have some time to spare, I will do hiking in the local park or explore the surrounding neighborhood where I live now. ... I will go hiking... |
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