Nov. 29, 2021
Weather
Every time during the winter, the skies here always look very overcast and it always makes us depressed. The nicest season here is autumn, which is always with clear blue skies and white clouds, and the temperature is also very nice, around twenty degrees Celsius. Spring here I think is the second nice season. During which, the temperature gradually became warm and all the trees and flowers started to grow, so you can see big pieces of green areas and many different kinds of flowers. As to summer, I think it's the opposite of the winter that the temperature will be very hot and the air is very humid, only at night that you can feel a little cooler. This picture was taken near my office building when I finished my lunch sitting in my car. How about the weather where you live?
Weather
Every time dDuring the winter here, the skies here always look very overcast, and it alwaythis makes us depressed.
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The nicest season here is autumn, which is always withhas clear, blue skies and white clouds, and t. The temperature is also very nice,: around twenty degrees Celsius.
Spring here, I think, is the second nice season.
During whichthat season, the temperature gradually becaomes warm and all the trees and flowers started to grow, so you can see big pieces of green areas and many different kinds of flowers.
As to summer, I think it's the opposite of the winter in that the temperature will beis very hot and the air is very humid,. It is only at night that you can feel a little cooler.
This picture was taken near my office building when I had finished my lunch while sitting in my car.
How about the weather where you live?
Feedback
I've made a few suggestions which I hope help to make your text flow a bit better in some places. However, your text is mostly understandable even without these suggestions.
sincerely,
mjm
Nov. 29, 2021
Thank you very much. I really appreciate those corrections.
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Every time during the winter, the skies here always look very overcast and it always makes us depressed.
Rearranged to help make your text flow better. |
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The nicest season here is autumn, which is always with clear blue skies and white clouds, and the temperature is also very nice, around twenty degrees Celsius. The nicest season here is autumn, which |
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Spring here I think is the second nice season. Spring here, I think, is the second nice season. |
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During which, the temperature gradually became warm and all the trees and flowers started to grow, so you can see big pieces of green areas and many different kinds of flowers. During |
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As to summer, I think it's the opposite of the winter that the temperature will be very hot and the air is very humid, only at night that you can feel a little cooler. As to summer, I think it's the opposite of |
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This picture was taken near my office building when I finished my lunch sitting in my car. This picture was taken near my office building when I had finished my lunch while sitting in my car. |
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How about the weather where you live? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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