Oct. 13, 2024
Weals and Woes
A renowned philosophy that suggests weals and woes always be with us. When people are in a bad mood, don't forget that weals are approaching. On the contrary, when we are immersed in joyfulness, be cautioned that woes are imminent.
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Weals and Woes
A renowned philosophy that suggests that weals and woes are always be with us.
A renowned philosophy suggests that weals and woes are always with us.
When people are in a bad mood, don'have misfortune, they should not forget that weals are approaching.
When people have misfortune, they should not forget that weals are approaching.
"Misfortune" fits a little better than "bad mood" here, especially if using the terms "weals" and "woes."
On the contrarConversely, when we are immersed in joyfulness,good fortune, we should be cautionedus that woes are imminent.
Conversely, when we are immersed in good fortune, we should be cautious that woes are imminent.
"Conversely" here is a better word to use than "on the contrary," which sounds like you are arguing a point. You might also write: "On the other hand, when we are immersed in good fortune..."
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I agree with the Paolo12 that "weal" is an uncommon word, but if you are talking about astrology or divination concepts to an audience familiar with those terms, it should be fine.
Oct. 14, 2024
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Weals and Woes
A renowned philosophy that suggests weals and woes always be with us.
When people are in a bad mood, they shouldon't forget that weals are approaching.
When people are in a bad mood, they shouldn't forget that weals are approaching.
On the contrary, when we are immersed in joyfulness, we should be cautionedus that woes are imminent.
On the contrary, when we are immersed in joyfulness, we should be cautious that woes are imminent.
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Good job! "Weal" is an uncommon word. "Joy and sorrow" can be a more accessible substitute to the phrase "weals and woes".
Oct. 14, 2024
Thank you for your corrections!
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When people are in a bad mood, don't forget that weals are approaching.
When people are in a bad mood, they should
When people "Misfortune" fits a little better than "bad mood" here, especially if using the terms "weals" and "woes." |
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On the contrary, when we are immersed in joyfulness, be cautioned that woes are imminent.
On the contrary, when we are immersed in joyfulness, we should be cautio
"Conversely" here is a better word to use than "on the contrary," which sounds like you are arguing a point. You might also write: "On the other hand, when we are immersed in good fortune..." |
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