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Oct. 15, 2020

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Weak pleasures

I saw someone's tweet about laziness in our daily life.
People are often tempted by watching TV, SNS, and Net surfing, and lose their time dealing with more important things.
He called them "weak pleasures". In this day and age, you always suffers from such stimuli, consequently, your brain recognizes that your time indulging in them is normal state.
Once you stuck in this situation, it's difficult to get out.

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Weak pPleasures

I saw someone's tweet about laziness in our daily life.

People are often tempted by watching TV, SNSsocial media, and Net surfing, and the net that they lose their time dealing with more important things.

We don't really refer to social media as SNS

When I see SNS what comes to my mind is text messaging

He called them "weak pleasures".

In this day and age, you always suffers from such stimuli, and consequently, your brain recognizes that your time indulging in them is normal state.

Once you stuck in this situation, it's difficult to get out.

Weak pleasures


Weak pPleasures

I saw someone's tweet about laziness in our daily life.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

People are often tempted by watching TV, SNS, and Net surfing, and lose their time dealing with more important things.


People are often tempted by watching TV, SNSsocial media, and Net surfing, and the net that they lose their time dealing with more important things.

We don't really refer to social media as SNS When I see SNS what comes to my mind is text messaging

He called them "weak pleasures".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In this day and age, you always suffers from such stimuli, consequently, your brain recognizes that your time indulging in them is normal state.


In this day and age, you always suffers from such stimuli, and consequently, your brain recognizes that your time indulging in them is normal state.

Once you stuck in this situation, it's difficult to get out.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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