May 29, 2022
We had been in Jeju island
We had been in Jeju island. We saw the hawk at the cliff. Hawks are the fastest birds in the world. They live at the cliff. We had the binoculars. When we found out the hawk, we were so excited. We were in the middle of the hiking. There are twenty hiking routes called Olle-gil in Jeju island. I like it so much and it was my second trip there. It takes five to six hours for walking across the a single route. There are many guesthouses near the route so you don't need to worry about to stay.
I'd appreciate it if you could teach me various expressions
We had been into Jeju iIsland
You can also say 'we had been on Jeju Island'. This translation emphasises the fact that you were on Jeju island when something ELSE potentially happened.
'We had been to Jeju Island' emphasises the fact that it was a trip - you went then came back.
We had been in Jeju island.
We had been to Jeju Island.
They live aton/in the cliff.
We had the binoculars.
"We had the binoculars" = we had them, instead of a different team having them. OR, depending on intonation: we had the binoculars, instead of the scissors.
There is an element of COMPARISON.
"We had binoculars" = We had binoculars.
This is more GENERAL.
We were in the middle of the hikinge.
'we were in the middle of hiking' = CORRECT
'we were in the middle of the hike' = CORRECT
'we were in the middle of the hiking' = INCORRECT
There are twenty hiking routes called Olle-gil ion Jeju island.
It takes five to six hours forto walking across the a single route.
There are many guesthouses near the route so you don't need to worry about where to stay.
May 29, 2022
Thank you so much !!
May 29, 2022
Thank you so much !!
No problem!
They live aton the cliff.
They live "on" the cliff. The preposition "on" works better than "at"
When we found out the hawk, we were so excited.
The preposition "out" is not necessary. You can just say "when we found the hawk"
We were in the middle of the hikinge.
"hiking" is the present progressive of a verb. Because a verb "to be" (conjugated as "were") already exists at the beginning, we would use the noun "Hike", like "we were in the middle of the hike"
It takes five to six hours forto walking across the a single route.
the preposition "for" and the present progressive "walking" are replaced with the infinitive verb "to walk". The indefinite article "a" is used instead of the definite "The"
There are many guesthouses near the route so you don't need to worry about tohe stay.
"to stay" is the infinitive of a verb. "The stay" is a noun and works better in this situation.
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Overall, this is good. However, you might want to learn more about how verbs work in English, and "nominalization" - turning verbs into nouns
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We had been in Jeju island We had been You can also say 'we had been on Jeju Island'. This translation emphasises the fact that you were on Jeju island when something ELSE potentially happened. 'We had been to Jeju Island' emphasises the fact that it was a trip - you went then came back. |
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We had been in Jeju island. We had been in Jeju island. We had been to Jeju Island. |
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We saw the hawk at the cliff. |
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Hawks are the fastest birds in the world. |
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They live at the cliff. They live They live "on" the cliff. The preposition "on" works better than "at" They live |
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We had the binoculars. We had "We had the binoculars" = we had them, instead of a different team having them. OR, depending on intonation: we had the binoculars, instead of the scissors. There is an element of COMPARISON. "We had binoculars" = We had binoculars. This is more GENERAL. |
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When we found out the hawk, we were so excited. When we found The preposition "out" is not necessary. You can just say "when we found the hawk" |
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We were in the middle of the hiking. We were in the middle of the hik "hiking" is the present progressive of a verb. Because a verb "to be" (conjugated as "were") already exists at the beginning, we would use the noun "Hike", like "we were in the middle of the hike" We were in the middle of the hik 'we were in the middle of hiking' = CORRECT 'we were in the middle of the hike' = CORRECT 'we were in the middle of the hiking' = INCORRECT |
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There are twenty hiking routes called Olle-gil in Jeju island. There are twenty hiking routes called Olle-gil |
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I like it so much and it was my second trip there. |
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It takes five to six hours for walking across the a single route. It takes five to six hours the preposition "for" and the present progressive "walking" are replaced with the infinitive verb "to walk". The indefinite article "a" is used instead of the definite "The" It takes five to six hours |
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There are many guesthouses near the route so you don't need to worry about to stay. There are many guesthouses near the route so you don't need to worry about t "to stay" is the infinitive of a verb. "The stay" is a noun and works better in this situation. There are many guesthouses near the route so you don't need to worry about where to stay. |
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