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lnc

March 8, 2021

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We are a foster Family

My husband and I love animals. We share our life with two rescued dogs. We adopted them a few years ago. They bring us happiness, and we would like to contribute to help other cats and dogs to find a home. For this reason, we are volunteers in an animal protection association.
Recently, they asked us to host a couple of kittens. They were scared and mistrustful. Our mission was to provide them a safe environment. This should allow them to improve their relation with human beings.
Slowly, they started to play with us and we petted them carefully.
Next week they will move to a definitive home. A family has adopted them. They are lucky cats.

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We share our life with two rescued dogs.

For this reason, we are volunteers in an animal protection association.

Recently, they asked us to host a couple of kittens.

This should allow themIn order to improve their relationship with human beings.

Next week they will move to a definitive permanent home.

or 'forever home'

Our mission was to provide them with a safe environment.

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lnc

March 8, 2021

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Many thanks!!

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emma049

March 9, 2021

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No problem

We are a foster Family


My husband and I love animals.


We share our life with two rescued dogs.


We share our life with two rescued dogs.

We adopted them a few years ago.


They bring us happiness, and we would like to contribute to help other cats and dogs to find a home.


For this reason, we are volunteers in an animal protection association.


For this reason, we are volunteers in an animal protection association.

Recently, they asked us to host a couple of kittens.


Recently, they asked us to host a couple of kittens.

They were scared and mistrustful.


Our mission was to provide them a safe environment.


Our mission was to provide them with a safe environment.

This should allow them to improve their relation with human beings.


This should allow themIn order to improve their relationship with human beings.

Slowly, they started to play with us and we petted them carefully.


Next week they will move to a definitive home.


Next week they will move to a definitive permanent home.

or 'forever home'

A family has adopted them.


They are lucky cats.


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