Feb. 16, 2021
We all make mistake
I am a constant change job person.
The longest job I have been working was around 5 years.
Most other jobs that I’ve worked will be less than a year.
I didn’t like that but that was the fact.
One of reason will be my low competence, I am just good enough.
One other main reason was the big mistake I created.
So, in two jobs I make the same mistake and cause the boss fired me.
The boss tries to blame me with a loud voice.
I argue back and won the flight.
The result was I fired at new year eve and Chinese New Year eve.
Hey, this is my ruth story.
We all make mistake
'We all make mistakes' -- plural :)
I am a constant change job person.
Correct but 'I am a constantly changing jobs person' or 'I am a person who constantly changes job' sound more natural :)
The longest job I have been working was around 5 years.
'The longest job I have worked was around 5 years' :)
Most other jobs that I’ve worked will be less than a year.
'Most other jobs that I've worked were less than a year' :)
I didn’t like that but that was the fact.
One of reason will be my low competence, I am just good enough.
'One of the reasons was my low competence' :)
One other main reason was the big mistake I created.
'Another' works better here but not incorrect! :)
So, in two jobs I make the same mistake and cause the boss fired me.
'...I made the same mistake and caused the boss to fire me' :)
The boss tries to blame me with a loud voice.
'The boss tried to blame me...'
I argue back and won the flight.
'I argued back...' :)
The result was I fired at new year eve and Chinese New Year eve.
'The result was that I got fired on New Years Eve and Chinese New Years Eve' :)
Hey, this is my ruth story.
'This is my true story' :)
Feedback
Great job, mistakes were only because of mixed tenses. Keep it up! And sorry you got fired for standing up for yourself!!
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We all make mistake We all make mistake 'We all make mistakes' -- plural :) |
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I am a constant change job person. I am a constant change job person. Correct but 'I am a constantly changing jobs person' or 'I am a person who constantly changes job' sound more natural :) |
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The longest job I have been working was around 5 years. The longest job I have been working was around 5 years. 'The longest job I have worked was around 5 years' :) |
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Most other jobs that I’ve worked will be less than a year. Most other jobs that I’ve worked will be less than a year. 'Most other jobs that I've worked were less than a year' :) |
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I didn’t like that but that was the fact. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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One of reason will be my low competence, I am just good enough. One of reason will be my low competence, I am just good enough. 'One of the reasons was my low competence' :) |
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One other main reason was the big mistake I created. One other main reason was the big mistake I created. 'Another' works better here but not incorrect! :) |
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So, in two jobs I make the same mistake and cause the boss fired me. So, in two jobs I make the same mistake and cause the boss fired me. '...I made the same mistake and caused the boss to fire me' :) |
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The boss tries to blame me with a loud voice. The boss tries to blame me with a loud voice. 'The boss tried to blame me...' |
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I argue back and won the flight. I argue back and won the flight. 'I argued back...' :) |
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The result was I fired at new year eve and Chinese New Year eve. The result was I fired at new year eve and Chinese New Year eve. 'The result was that I got fired on New Years Eve and Chinese New Years Eve' :) |
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Hey, this is my ruth story. Hey, this is my ruth story. 'This is my true story' :) |
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